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To Those That Ask |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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To Those That Ask < !signature-->come thee, rapture! come, curtain call! who knows when it might fall that night of the where, and the night of when and if it will come again pray it might pray it should come again 'twas once good shall it be so good again to know of where and thus, the when? always know of what one speaks tho tempest blows before it peaks and shadows fall on quarrel tendered when actually love should render its beauty's thrill of love in splendor come again thee dusky light and give the living up to night Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Rapture peaks in twilight mist Hour set in hidden time Cast the net shower the sea Come thee to those that ask answers stated promise given Grasp the cloud hug the shadow Luna's up beams crossed in night of hours wooden owl cries take heed to life take not to death Bring forth the living quench the thirst for all that seek the power of life =================== Wonderful write from you my friend. Loved the promise with the heeded word. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, that is lovely, and should be posted in its own right...and thanks for reading! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Oh Kari! This is soooo good, it's really really fabulous. Loud applause, and cheers from me, (Yes I know, I'm noisy, but well you know me love, can't ever be quiet!) Actually love I can, I've lost my voice! Kari all your work is brilliant, and this is sublime, I really love it, every single word is wonderful. Still if I had to choose one part it would be this Pray it might pray it should Come again 'twas once good Shall it be so good again Utterly perfect, really great. I'll E you next week I promise, take care Kari Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh my Karilea sooooooo beautiful. Every single word!!!! Bonnie |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
No comment except SUPERB! Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Every word beautiful. . . Just wonderful. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, excellent poem loved it. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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StarGlow Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 40 |
Encore! encore! That's why a encore cannot be xperienced except at the height of that moment. High andlows are a fact, aren't they? Very descript and versatile, among other thoughts, enjoyed very much. Star |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, even in silence, I hear your every clap...thank you... Bonnie, thank you so much... Cat,...{~,^} Sven, Brian...from two of the best...wow... Starglow, a deep curtsey, thank you for coming in to read, and yet another person I can add to a list of wonderful readers...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
It shall come again And it will not be "Just as good" - It will be better - For we are better - We have the belief- We're willing To give ourselves to it - It shall be! this one of yours - is going directly to my treasure box |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for the fine gifts you give, Mr. Yeats... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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