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She Said Mommy
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She Said Mommy |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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She said "Mommy, when I go away today will you be there when I get home?" I said "Yes honey, I will be here when you get home." She said "Mommy I might be gone till dark will you let the light on for me?" I said "Yes honey, I will leave the light on for you to come home." She said "Mommy, some day I might leave for a long, long time will I still be able to come home?" I said, "Baby, you will always be able to come home." She said "Mommy, I love you." I said "My angel I will always love you." On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Gentle Spirit--This is a very touching poem! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Thank you for such a beautiful poem. I do remember when my little boys would never leave home without a hug and saying "I Love You Mommy" |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
There are truly no sweeter words than these GS...beautiful work from your heart~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie, Inot, Butterfly, thank you all so much. Children can give us so much love that it almost hurts sometimes. Again, my sincere thanks.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ And we build their faith in us on small staircases that they can easily climb one small step at a time. This is a lovely write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a very lovely and sweet poem and you seem to be a very caring parent. Nathan |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
there is no love like a childs love. This is beautiful. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious, Gentle Spirit! You've captured the love between child and parent perfectly! Denise |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
you've told it like a true parent who loves their child unconditionally. Heartwarming. Its a touching poem. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge, Nate, Rosebud, D, and Ron......whew......thanks to you all. I think sometimes we can take for granted the little things that our children say to us, and as after thoughts we sit back and say........ "Man, there is nothing like the love of a child." Thanks all. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
How did I miss this one GS?? This is wonderful. . . perfect feelings. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gentle Spirit- this is so precious. simple...yet it says so very much. nothing is sweeter than the love and trust between a parent and a child...beautifully done. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sven, so glad that you didn't, and thanks for stopping in too!! Vicky, nothing can compare to that bond. Thank you. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Gentle Spirit, You really opened my heart. This is so very precious. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Daniel, thank you. Our children are so precious.......and they mean so much. I thank you for your kindness. |
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