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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-10-27 08:43 PM

Shadows of desire
c
  r
   e
    e
     p

out of hiding.

Tonight you may wear the mask
that reveals
the most..

Be as dark
as you
f
  e
   e
    l

Live your fantasy
or
your
r
  e
   a
    l
     i
      t
       y....

I am a Vampire
Princess..
tonight
it shall be seen.

R
  e
   t
    r
     i
      b
       u
        t
         i
          o
           n
draws
near..

Those who consumed
my love
without
regard
will
feel
the
t
  o
   u
    c
     h

      o
       f

         m
          y

            t
             r
              u
               t
                h
They will feel

m
  y

    p
     a
      i
       n
as
their
own...

My tears
of blood
will not be
c
  o
   n
    t
     a
      i
       n
        e
         d
any
longer..



[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 10-28-2000).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2000-10-27 08:46 PM

Boo!, catalinamoon,

Wonderful presentation, and a well written Halloweeny poem. What out though, who's behind that tree? hehehe

Bill

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

2 posted 2000-10-27 08:50 PM

ooooooooo---- i am so very afraid... I shant sleep atall this evening....----hehe
well done catalina

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Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-10-27 08:51 PM

CatalinaMoon~
This is GREAT ....
both the format and the phrasing are excellent.
Way to rise to a challenge, gal !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2000-10-27 10:05 PM

eweee spooky.
Very good style.
Deb

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2000-10-27 10:16 PM

ooooh, I wouldn't want to be on your BAD side...great presentation...although I have a crick in my neck from tilting it...LOL...Happy Halloween!

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2000-10-28 01:19 PM

Excellent! I love the way you formatted this.. very cool.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2000-10-28 01:23 PM

Wonderful Sandra! I liked your style in this, left me with spooky thoughts on this perfectly spooky weekend! Great read!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2000-10-28 06:59 PM

*boo*...great work.....and I love your presentation.....enjoyed reading it...

Charisma

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2000-10-28 07:03 PM

Will you weave a spell for me to use too..haa..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

10 posted 2000-10-28 08:21 PM

B
l
  o
   o
    d
of souls
taken tonight

necks of
undead shall
fall within
the vampiress
b
r
  e
   a
    t
     h

Sharpened teeth
clenched
in fits of need
s
p
  a
   r
    k
     l
      i
       n
        g
in wet desire
of quenching

================

WOW.....now where are you going to be tonight?  Wanna make sure I protect my neck....LOL...

Excellent penning Sandra.  Loved it.  Go get what is due to you.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

11 posted 2000-10-31 07:32 AM

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