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Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

0 posted 2000-10-27 05:36 PM

What sweet maiden fair will surrender to me?
Who will long to feel my hands cup her tender face,
Taste the passions of my kiss,
Laced with the wine of desire?
Will she dare to feel the heat of my breath
Upon the nape of her neck?
Burning. Burning.
Will she coo at the tickle of whispers,
Drifting to her ears,
Becoming searching fingers,
Running down her spine?
Longing. Longing.
Will she dare gasp as our bodies meet,
On a collision forever meant to be?
Destined to a silent scream,
Drenched in salted beads scattered as pearls on flesh.
Gasping. Gasping.
Will she lay upon my bed of roses,
Which I have stripped of thorns,
Of which my bleeding fingers will atest?
Will she lay beneath our mantle of stars
With supple dreams to follow?
Drifting. Drifting.
Oh sweet maiden fair, where oh where.
Will our paths be abandoned, blanketed by thickets,
Twisted barriers yet to be breached?
Or open roads to the heart?
Waiting. Waiting.

[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-28-2000).]

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

1 posted 2000-10-27 05:40 PM

now ladies, please remember this is just a poem...so don't get to crazy...or else i'll have a lot to explain to my wife lol

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

2 posted 2000-10-28 02:37 AM

woohoo! so romantic!! i like, i like!

wife?? maybe she likes too!!

love this:

Will she lay upon my bed of roses,
Which I have stripped of thorns,
Of which my bleeding fingers will atest?

this one needs another chance at the top

consider yourself bumped! (teehee..that sounded bad didnt it..!

)

hugs, dg

"after a while, you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul..." -V A Shoffstall

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2000-10-28 03:05 AM

Oooh a bit steamy loved it
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

4 posted 2000-10-28 07:40 AM

Woohoo Ron!

Terrific!

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-10-28 11:06 AM

And where is he, my knight so bold
to carry me out of this cold
to prove to me that men of old
still exist, have not all sold?

My knight will drink the wine with me
and hold the chalice up to see
the love that sparkles in it deep
A treasure we can always keep.

Inspiration, Ron, thats you..
Surely I could do better, but this was spontaneous..LOL
Love your work. Tell your wife she is lucky..
Sandra

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

6 posted 2000-10-28 11:35 AM

Thank you ladies, especially for the bump (hee hee), and truhfully I'm the lucky one.
And geez, i gotta find those thornless roses, it's costing me a fortune in bandages.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-10-28 12:40 PM

Very romantic, Ron! Whew...is it getting hot in here?

Denise

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

8 posted 2000-10-28 12:45 PM

..talk,

talk,

talk

!!! Marcy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2000-10-28 04:51 PM

Romantic...James

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2000-10-28 04:53 PM

RonK~ your wife is just going to have to face the fact that you are romantic and us women here are suckers for it!! Loved this one.

-SEA

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

11 posted 2000-10-29 07:23 PM

Just got back to replying...thanks everyone, don't always get to reply on everyone of mine, trying to get to read everyone is the best part of this trip. As for all you gals, hey I'm here to please lol

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

12 posted 2000-10-29 07:55 PM

She's one lucky wife, methinks...

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

13 posted 2000-10-29 07:57 PM

I thoroughly enjoyed the entire format and the way this was written.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

14 posted 2000-10-29 08:24 PM

*SIGH* Now why can't guys talk like that to me????

Much love all,
Krissie

~*Those words...
Oh, how I long to hear
...those words
Tell me...*~

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

15 posted 2000-10-29 09:27 PM

~Oh Wow....Im speechless....Great write!!~

~Cherie~

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

16 posted 2000-10-29 10:05 PM

Do tell,What fair maiden would not succomb to thy words so lovely written from the heart?

Written so beautiful as I close thy eyes, I hear the tune of your words playing danceing across thy lips as I am reading them from the page!

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

17 posted 2000-10-29 10:20 PM

Now fair maidens,
so many that take heart
I give a rose to each, (thornless of course)
but those thorns, they smart.
Ah but that is fine,
what's a little tweak'
and send you along,
with a kiss upon your cheek.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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