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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-10-27 02:46 PM


Look deeply within my soul
Look into the passions blue
the opening to my heart
See the very best of me
so often you have saught
Look into the passions
I have locked up tight
help me open the door
So they may live again
Look into emptiness
and fill it with your love
Make me see the real me
once again restored.

© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

1 posted 2000-10-27 03:50 PM


Beautiful feelings here...they need to be freed...so...
here is the key
to open heart's door,
to free you sweet angel,
to free you once more.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-10-28 03:47 AM


it is the most precious view anyone can have

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-10-28 11:40 AM


Look deeply within my soul
Look into the passions blue
the opening to my heart
See the very best of me
==============
this is exactly how it feels..
this is a very cool poem Rose...
very well written..you have expressed
many emotions with depth ...
in just a few well chosen words..
perfect poetry
take care
jm

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-10-28 12:14 PM


Beautifully expressed longing, Rosebud!

Denise

Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-10-29 12:49 PM


Thanks Ron, I needed that key and now that I have it many doors become unlocked.
Janet Marie, you always know the right words to say
Irish Rose, unlocking the heart brings about many wonderful things your right they are precious yet how often we hold them in.
Denise, sometimes it's very hard to convey my feelings so I'm glad you could feel them.
Your so right it is a longing.

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