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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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She blessed me with color and fragrance. She left me with a headache. In the rain she walked home. She didn't need a light. I listen to her footsteps grow fainter, part of the falling sky. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike I love this.......I love the rain.....it's raining tonight.......I don't need a light either.........  - SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
just what I needed...a good good-bye poem for my thoughts to settle...thank you mike. you've done it again. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
SEA, No, you don't, do you? S'en, Glad you enjoyed. "Good goodbye." Hey, sounds like the title of a poem. Mike |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Makes me kinda sad though, not just a goodnight when you're left with a headache. sounds like a heart break is about to go down, bro. |
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