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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Dollop of Dolls You thought I was worth keeping Lined me up with the other Windup dolls, intertwined organza, Permanent pink elasticized grins. But I fell off your collector’s shelf With a thud, no longer my confidant Or mental stud, into southern mud Naked as the day I was assembled. This might be your view simplified Could it be, that in reality You never knew me, I wasn’t just a doll after all? © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ this is fantastic!  -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
powerful words to set him straight. Good job. If he didn't take the time to see the real you, he is just a blind fool. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it Corinne... its funny but i never cared for dolls when i was little..haa..~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, SEA, Ron and Victoria, This person no longer matters, but it is curious to me how they saw me, or how I must have presented myself at the time... Corinne |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Great poem, Corrinne. It's good to hear the person no longer matters. Gives me some hope. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, I loved this, I had a doll once, and I lost her.... "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Corinne, whoever saw you in this light was indeed a fool and if they heard any of your poems they would realise the depth of their error. wondefully written from the heart of a true poet, no doll for sure. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, I seem to have missed this doll of a piece... your one of those rare dolls... the sassy type, a doll with an attitude. Irish Barbie.. lol. I gotta get me one of those. Parker |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Corinne, I agree with your poem conclusion he was too shallow to have ever known you 'Could it be, that in reality You never knew me,' Jon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Well, I know a DOLL when I see one - and you're IT ! Oh, yeah .... and a doll that recites poetry ! Now THAT makes you a collector's item ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Catalina moon, in the long run, what is most important is how this person makes you feel, if they make you feel bad about yourself, even part of the time, then they don't deserve you. Thank you, Irish Rose, a doll is just a plaything, easily replaced... Brian, how sweet you are. Thank you. Park, Irish Barbie, aye, long red hair, green eyes and the ability to leap rings of fire, with a blink of the eye, she'll steal your heart then vanish back into the mist of the moors! Hmmm, maybe Mattel would be interested! Jon, thank you kindly. Marge, you got a chuckle out of me with your response! Thanks! A collector's item, now, does that also make me an antique? LOL Corinne |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Corrine- wow...i'm loving this. wonderful write. LOL @ Parker...Irish Barbie...lol. i'm thinkin' maybe Poet Barbie instead...lol. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You are definitely not one to be encased in porcelain or plastic. Think Mattel is ready for a living breathing doll yet? Wonderful write. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Corinne....well, you ARE a doll...and much, much more. This is really well thought out and presented.....doll  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Vicky, Mark and Deer! Corinne |
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