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Moonlit Night |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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The Chivalry of this moonlit night The rings surround the forth gone light They give me all that I will need They see that which my soul does bleed The beast within this wretched one With fires burning, lifeless sun Entrenched in pain of utter course I feel no shame consume remorse. For hallows eve I’ll walk again Embrace this earth, not foe nor friend To take that which I want so much Exude from such initial lust Fervor for your tempting craze Holding from that inner rage To bare that which we feel inside Intensely sharing one last rite. The flashing of the sparks that fly Creating heat, exhausting sigh The calming of the spent release As passion simmers from this beast. And with the end of night so near I leave from that in which I fear Your fires burning aftermath Has taken me far off of my path So when the darkness comes once more And moonlight starves for us to soar I’ll come to you that starlit night And devour you to my delight Close your eyes then you can see The darkness deep inside of me That stalks your every move within The moment pulls you to my sin. And you are free. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Awesome, Spiked. Intense and well done. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Spiked~ the best........ "And with the end of night so near I leave from that in which I fear Your fires burning aftermath Has taken me far off of my path So when the darkness comes once more And moonlight starves for us to soar I’ll come to you that starlit night And devour you to my delight" Ohhhhh, I just love that.....Great Poem!!!  -SEA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very awesome..Stunning. Love it. Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
hauntingly passionate fires that burn within thee. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
So...we're all aligned now? LOL...methinks you've been taking witchcraft 101! Very intense. I like. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This just makes me shiver...you get right under the skin with this one Rich |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It makes me shiver too, but I don't think it's from fear  laughs This is just wonderful!!! So intense and passionate!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Sorry for taking so long to reply thought I did already lol. Thank you Elizabeth, SEA, Catalinamoon, Ron, Serenity, Paula and peppermint35 Always look forward to your replies. Nice to feel a part of passions. Rich |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Im in here playing catch-up... glad I didnt miss this very cool write.. INTENSE...INDEED ... very cool Rich... me thinks ya been watching sweet Sen do her candle dance ...  love the mystic, cryptic, goth feel of this one excellent write poet sir ... jm |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you JM season gettin me i guess |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Just thought i'd send it up front for halloween Rich |
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