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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-26 03:07 PM


Ghost winds moan in the night
in the bed of the desert
under sheets of moonlight

blood of coyotes boil within
listening to haunting moans
of  ghost legend sins
the laughter in the air
and saloon moonshine
the Miss Kitty's of the west
and the cheap red wine

ghost winds haunt
the desert oasis
in the saddle of the night
are cowboy faces
mystic sands swirl
within the dunes
voices of lovers moan
to haunting guitar tunes




A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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ma miller
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1 posted 2000-10-26 03:33 PM


Victoria ... this has such a subtle voice to it ... well done ...
Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-10-26 03:39 PM


I like this...a lot!

Karilea
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peppermint35
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3 posted 2000-10-26 03:42 PM


Just lovely; hauntingly beautiful

Peppermint
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EagleOne
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4 posted 2000-10-26 03:53 PM


It is always most enjoyable to read your work!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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5 posted 2000-10-26 03:57 PM


Victoria~ I love the feel of this.......I've always wanted to go to a ghost town....



        


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Victoria
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6 posted 2000-10-26 04:37 PM


Ma, sunshine..peppermint..Eagle one and sea..thank you so much for reading..i do appreciate all your kind compliments..
i love that cute little monkey Sea haa..thank you..
                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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7 posted 2000-10-26 08:29 PM


Ooh, has a nice eerie feel to it.
As always, good stuff.
Sandra

Victoria
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8 posted 2000-10-26 10:06 PM


Thank you sweetie..glad you enjoyed..

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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