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The Worst Poetry You Will Ever Read |
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Sunshine
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The Worst Poetry You Will Ever Read the worst poetry you will ever skim will come from the blankest of pens from a mind which has gone awry because of the tears in his eyes the day his love died he will not be able to shed his soul of the sorrow and the guilt all of which was once built on the pedestal of his own roles for his love that died and she, remorseful, will never know that passion which should make her glow because she couldn’t find the wend to make the words come flow again for her love that died then the adages that were built to keep the bridge even from its tilt before the world would collapse and wishing for Cleo’s asp for her love that died so from them the worst of all poetry was blank from the love that died, you see… |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I do see, said SEA  Wonderfully done.  -SEA |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Yes, you've said it very well. Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, Oh this is superb, really excellant, as always love. Wonderful poem, brilliant flow, and absolutely superb. Yes I really do love it. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Like “Old News is No News”- No Poetry IS the Worst poetry of all. Melton |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
At first, I thought this was going to be about me! LOL But seriously, this was beautiful and sad. The last lines were a good ending to the poem.Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow to be egotistical going in i thought this was gonna be a parody on my poem from the book submissions called "The Best Poem You Ever Read" but this is way cool yuh yuh |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Glad you saw, SEA...thanks!... Thank you Peppermint... Marsha, I've GOT to write a really BAD one just for you...LOL...thank you... I agree, Melton... and I agree with you, Elizabeth, thank you... WOW...I would never attempt to play on your words, now around them, perhaps...but thanks for coming in to read... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A wonderful surprise - I expected a poem quoted - and found great great perception |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Karilea. . . the worst poetry indeed comes from a heart without love. . . Wonderful. . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you said it.....its sad, losing love is the worst thing...and you expressed that so well....superb. (((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Mr. Yeats, laughing softly with you..."great great" and comments like that, duplication of word, is how I often speak...thank you for the smile... Sven, Charisma, thank you for your comments and for checking in...and leaving your calling cards... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, No news is not necessarily good news and nothing to say is the saddest news of all. great write. Be well Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Kethry...glad to see you...thanks for reading... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I've always said, a bad poem is better than a blank page. For then there is nothing to say And you said it so beautifully Liz |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Yes, Lady Elizabeth, for at least an effort was then made... thank you my dear... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Can any effort from the heart ever really be bad? I think not. Wonderful piece from you my friend. |
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Kelly Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145 |
Very touching. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So right, Mark...it is amazing what one will do for the right cause...so better to have lived with, then without...and an effort made, than not... Thank you Kelly! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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