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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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Nashville

0 posted 2000-10-26 02:41 PM


We are bonded by time
that transends our souls
by the simple touch
that creats we humans
the one shared on a wall
in the caves of France
that are not unlike my childs
her hands command.
We are creatures of time
though ours may not seem enough.

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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-10-26 02:51 PM


Michael this is great...I particularly liked...we are creatures of time, though ours may not seem enough
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2000-10-26 02:54 PM


...it will never be enough! Lot said, few words...good!
Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

3 posted 2000-10-26 10:01 PM


we've come a long way...and you expressed it well.
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