Open Poetry #10 |
Sweet Mystery & Magic |
Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
There's a tender magic How we became intimate Not in a physical sense But so real Feelings shared, Deep and close Barely a day goes by We don't seek one another Treasure the words We pass between us Comfort warm and abiding Is it any wonder I want more? Can I imagine Life without you Not now Not ever again It goes beyond Chemistry Beyond scent Past the realm Of the senses To where the logic Is defied And physical contact Is demanded There's a sweet mystery Giving ourselves to each other I can visualize My hands move from hugs To caresses, to holding clutch Fingers kneading your buns Then feeling yours gripping mine There's a magic we know Our lips press and tongues intertwine Confluence of rivers The electric static discharge Well beyond chemical No physicist can explain Mystery or magic I want to share the feeling Of our hands on each other Totally commune The total sensing Of our lips as they kiss |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wilfred. . . this is superb. . . I love it. . . Mystery or Magic? Perhaps a little of both my friend. . . Excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
So do I...what beautiful thoughts Bill |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
You have one great one after another. Beautifully expressed. ron |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
uh-oh, another speechless comment...but a soft wow Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Sven- I think perhaps - you're right ~S~ - Thank you Paula - you always say nice things Ron - I appreciate you - really thank you Karilea- Uh-oh - thank you |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent as usual, Bill... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Deer - My humble thanks for such praise from you who I admire so much |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is lovely...warm and intimate! I enjoyed this very much, Wilfred. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweet love poem. Some woman has found a romantic soul in you. She better appreciate it.. Thanks for your support on my poem, also. Sandra |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Serenity- Thank you - I only hope 'she' appreciates it as much as I believe it Catalina - I believe she does ~S~ -I live on that belief. Thank you |
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