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Wings of my Dreams |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Italian Sonnet < !signature-->In the darkness, far beyond the night Is an unreachable, bright star The star that shines brighter, no matter how far The one you cling to, always in sight The one you are drawn, the power of a white knight Humming to the slow tempo, the strings of a guitar In the shadows of the hemisphere, to the Cote d'Ivoire The wings of my dreams, my dreams take flight The one bright star, will it always be there? Mystical starlight shining above How could it be anything, but what it seems? Yes, I think it is, it is you my love Bathing me in fragrance of foxglove My brilliant star, my celestial regime A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, as always. Damn we should be better appreciated by these men, don't you think? Want to help me with sonnets? Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
You create one amazing beauty after another. i for one am appreciative. Thank you for that lovely image. ron [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sandra..sent you an email hon..ill do my best.  thank youRon..So nice of you to say..thank you..happy you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* this was beautiful Victoria.....love it.....love is so wonderful... Charisma |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, absolutely lovely...a delight to read. Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Charisma and Robert..thank you for reading..i do appreciate you peeking in.. and for your very nice comments..~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful. The title was what grabbed me. Nice work, Victoria. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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