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spiked
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0 posted 2000-10-25 09:29 PM



Whisper to me
Say the things I want to hear
Speak it softly
Let the words reflect your mind

Listen to me
I’m speaking to you with my eyes
Hear the passion
It goes beyond mere surface

Want me
To feel the beating of your heart
To see you tremble
As we touch

Need me
To place my hand around your waist
Become a part of you
And you a part of me

Overwhelm me
With all I long to feel
That which I lack
That which I crave

Release me
From the binds that hold
Confining me to this darkness
More than I have told

Understand me
Look deeper at me
See more than what I show
See that which I hide inside

Whisper to me
And in turn I’ll whisper to you
Share the deepest of thoughts
My deepest need
compassion

© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-10-25 10:03 PM


very sweet and sensual---hmmm...ssshhh...

A very tempting read here, Rich.  Hugs.  Love.  and of course, much compassion...

*wink*

Ron K. Fox
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2 posted 2000-10-25 10:03 PM


Spiked. It was beautifully expressed. I hope that someone is listening to you. Ron
Gemini
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3 posted 2000-10-25 10:12 PM


Spiked-I sense the compassion and much more, I like your style in writing this.
Paula Finn
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4 posted 2000-10-26 02:20 AM


SSHHHHHH...listen...can you hear me whisper? This was very sensual and sweet...
Charisma
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5 posted 2000-10-26 04:06 AM




do you hear my whispers....

~~~~~ .....Charisma.....

spiked
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6 posted 2000-10-26 07:46 AM


Thank you all so very much. I can feel you all for you have touched me in one way or another.
Rich

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-10-26 08:07 AM


Spiked~
What a lovely write ..
I love whispers ... they say so much.

'Whisper to me
And in turn I’ll whisper to you
Share the deepest of thoughts
My deepest need
compassion'


Lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~

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SEA
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8 posted 2000-10-26 09:59 AM


Spiked~ this is so hot....love it -SEA


            

juliet_2u
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9 posted 2000-10-26 10:41 AM


Rich this is really beautiful. Very moving and well expressed.
Juls

Beth
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10 posted 2000-10-26 10:45 AM


~This is truly a beautiful piece!!~

~Cherie~

spiked
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11 posted 2000-10-26 02:13 PM


Thank you Marge, Sea,Juls and Cherie When the earth and the moon align right with the sun I come across a time where I actually am able to write something sensual. hope to have a realignment again soon lol thanks all.
Rich

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12 posted 2000-10-26 03:09 PM


Well, guess what Rich!  Tonight we've got a new moon in Scorpio aligning with the sun and mercury...you think that's enough?  LOL...
spiked
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13 posted 2000-10-27 12:07 PM


Serenity is that why I have this strange craving tonite?
Could well be
Visious vision of a moon huh

peppermint35
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14 posted 2000-10-27 02:23 AM


'Understand me
Look deeper at me
See more than what I show
See that which I hide inside'

Oh, Rich, I'm speaking very softly....this is sooooooo lovely...I can hear you


Peppermint
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15 posted 2000-10-28 11:52 AM


shhhhu....whispers....I love when someone whispers to me.......loved it!!!!!!!!!
spiked
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16 posted 2000-10-29 10:28 PM


Thank you peppermint and vandana whispers can change a mood
Rich

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 10-29-2000).]

AniKay83
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17 posted 2000-10-29 10:31 PM


This softly speaks such romantic longing. Beautiful.

Much love all,
Krissie

spiked
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18 posted 2000-11-01 01:13 AM


Thank You AniKay83
Rich

CocoBaci
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19 posted 2000-11-01 01:17 AM


Spiked, this is soooo great I truly enjoyed the read it's such a treat to browse thru your poetry...

Coco

Rosebud1229
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20 posted 2000-11-01 12:05 PM


Rich excellent poem, there's something about a whisper, you've said it very quietly here but yet a whisper speaks loud and clear.
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