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Kethry
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0 posted 2000-10-25 05:29 PM


Mummy, mummy, please tell me true
What's this world about
For you are old and I'm still new
I know your words have clout

Mummy why do sunsets paint the sky
with pretty gold and reds?
Where does the tooth fairy fly
when you leave your bed?

Mummy all these questions are
running through my brain.
Give me answers, like a star?
Or I will go insane?

Mummy, do lady-birds cry
when their children run away?
Mummy dear, how blue's the sky
on a rainy day?

Mummy can you tell me
Before I grow too high
How does the wind know where to be?
How do angels know to fly?

My child, my child, come snuggle down
These questions now will keep
It's midnight, I'll softly kiss your crown
Be quiet, mummy needs to sleep.



Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

© Copyright 2000 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
peppermint35
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1 posted 2000-10-25 05:34 PM


How wonderful it is when they still believe that Mommy can answer all those things!!!

How warm and loving!!!  

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

suthern
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2 posted 2000-10-25 05:35 PM


This is delightful!
Kethry
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3 posted 2000-10-25 05:48 PM


Peppermint35,
Yes it is wonderful! Thanks

Suthern
Thanks for the response.


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Charisma
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4 posted 2000-10-25 05:51 PM


oh this one brought a warm smile up,
from the good old time for me,
you brought back the warmth of an innocent child back up in my heart, and yes especially at midnight.  

Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem

Charisma

Kethry
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5 posted 2000-10-25 05:54 PM


Charisma,
Thank- you for replying.
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Marsha
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6 posted 2000-10-25 06:47 PM


Kethry, now this is a prime example of why I missed you so much. A beautiful, loving, warm poem that you do and do so well. Wonderful, really beautiful write, and I love it.
Take care
                    Marsha
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Kethry
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7 posted 2000-10-25 07:16 PM


Marsha,
Thanks for the lovely compliments.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Ron K. Fox
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8 posted 2000-10-25 07:22 PM


said so sweetly. wish i had all those answers. (I still ask those questions) Ron
Irish Rose
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9 posted 2000-10-25 08:23 PM


I really enjoyed this, I'd give anything to have my daughter be this small again!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen


Daniel J D
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10 posted 2000-10-25 09:07 PM


Kethry,
A beautiful poem clearly showing the curiosity of children. However, the need to know is important for a child and one must have answers all the time. Children must not grow with doubts of those unanswered questions.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Paula Finn
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11 posted 2000-10-26 02:33 AM


There is nothing more joyful nor more exasperating than the questions of a child LOL...great write
catalinamoon
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12 posted 2000-10-26 12:13 PM


How pretty, almost like a lullabye. (other than the ending, based firmly in reality  LOL )
Lovely poem, thanks
Sandra

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