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Tell Me Something!
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Tell Me Something! How many times have I told you, And in how many different ways? Have you been paying attention? Are you lost in an unintelligible haze? Haven’t you heard it in my words? Haven’t you seen it in my eyes? Haven’t you felt it in my presence? Do you think your senses are lies? Don’t you know why I’m always around? If I weren’t, would you even care? How do you think I can stand this? Do you think your silence is fair? How much longer till you tell me what, For oh so long, I’ve longed to hear? How far off is that ecstasy, Or the rejection that I fear? Are you ever going to hear me? Are you ever going to reply? Maybe I shouldn’t pursue this... Maybe I shouldn’t even try. Love is the law, love under will. |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
jlocke, I was getting quite frustrated and loud as I read this in my head. If you've done all this, and still don't have a response, I would check for a pulse. Perhaps the silence is your answer? I enjoyed the read, but it's a terrible situation. Best Wishes Jon |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
There are times we think we're being clear as glass and, in reality, we still are being obtuse....maybe???? At any rate, the feelings expressed I can truly understand. Good write. Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
silence can be so worst.... I can relate on that one too. take care...((warm hug)) Charisma |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Jon Silence is worse than any attack of words. But you are right, her silence is my answer. It's like she used to say, "The sound of nothing really is something" peppermint35 Sometimes...yes, but this time...no. Thank you much. It's comforting to know people understand. Charisma My dove, always a pleasure to hear from you! Thanks for the hug. I needed it. Love is the law, love under will. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
It does seem like her silence speaks volumes...and every word hurts...you deserve better |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Silence is the worst but time tells the truth....I am going through much a simular thing and it hurts alot but you will know in the end...I hope things work out for you!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Silence is that glaring look you get without the words, the slap in the face without the hand. Ron |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Paula Finn I'm not sure I deserve anything more than what I have. I have a lot. She is already my best friend. Beth Thank you for the encouraging words. I hope all fairs well with you, too. Ron K. Fox Very true words, indeed. Ironically, I saw her last night, and in my sorrow I said much of nothing. She started to explain how she hates this silence, and wanted to say anything to make it go away. Why can't she say what I want to hear? peppermint35, maybe I have been being obtuse. Love is the law, love under will. |
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