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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-10-25 01:25 PM


Where is the light

I search within a parallel
The essence of a mood.
A living ringing memory bell
In shadows of seclude.

She visited my soul one day
Invited to the core
To sooth an ache I could not stay
And never out the door.

She since became a living spark
That lights within my soul
She's lit a candle in the dark
That shows a living shoal.

And I forever seek her out
This magic of her art
And fell in love there is no doubt
This women in my heart.

But distance fades the spectrum red
And somber sorrow seeps my head.


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Victoria
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1 posted 2000-10-25 01:34 PM


Always enjoy reading your poems Seymour
always in perfect rhythm..

                ~Victoria~


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- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


catalinamoon
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2 posted 2000-10-25 02:00 PM


This was very touching to me. Those last two lines really show some pain. Take care.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2000-10-25 03:58 PM


Victoria,
Thank you so much for the read and comment.

Sandra,
Thank you for the read and warm comment.

Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-10-25 04:20 PM




I will give the sun, to light her way to you...



a candle for the dark



and a torch, to kindle the flame that you have for her...

nothing more than this, can I do...

she's one lucky lady, Sy...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2000-10-25 04:35 PM


This is a very tender love poem, written only as you can write. Very moving
Liz

Martie
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6 posted 2000-10-25 05:35 PM


Sy--I must agree with Liz, but then I usually do.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2000-10-25 10:51 PM


Sunshine,
You trying to light up eternity? *L*

Elizabeth,
For you I can only return the rose. Love Sy

Martie,
And to you I send a rose too. *L*

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-10-26 12:35 PM


Seymour~

Within each heart
a light does glow
Lit with love's refrain
It always burns the brightest
and leads you home again
to love
to love
to love

*You write so pretty, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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9 posted 2000-10-26 12:45 PM


Oh Seymour, I can't help but sigh when I read this poem.  Such gentleness and elegance in style of write...

A delight to have read
Coco

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2000-10-26 08:29 AM


Marge,
And so do you. *L*

CocoBaci,
Flattery will get you everywhere. LOL

Charisma
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11 posted 2000-10-26 08:46 AM


*sigh*
you expressed it so well..
with the right words...
the flowing rhym..
I really loved it..

she is a lucky lady.

Charisma

tracie66
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12 posted 2000-10-26 08:50 AM


Hey Sy beautiful but sad...very welled penned my friend
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Mark Bohannan
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13 posted 2000-10-26 12:55 PM


Eternal beauty and love resting in the heart and memories in this one.  Very exceptional write.
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