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Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
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0 posted 2000-10-25 01:19 PM


Together, we were like a tapestry,
woven tightly in a colorful design,
spun from different dreams, different lives,
taken from all, formed into one.
A tapestry that is pleasing to the eye,    
the soul, the heart.
Until trembling fingers,
unsure of touch,
searching blindly for loose threads,
pulled and tugged, intent on finding faults,
extracted the brilliancy,
thread by thread.
Now the tapestry, which was our lives,
hangs in the solitude of a  darkened room,
drab and gray.
It has been rendered lifeless,
naked of it’s once splendid colors,
where no eyes can seek it,
no soul can be touched by it,
no heart can rejoice from it.
In a place so desolate,
it cannot be distinguished
from the shadows that  envelope it.
It has become dark, uninviting,
awaiting its time.
A time that can be cruel,
as so often, time is.
And as time has its way, it will unravel,
thread by thread,
until the tapestry that was once our lives,
shreds and falls
onto the dust laden floor.
A memory of the past,
to be no more.


© Copyright 2000 Ronald Kenneth Fox - All Rights Reserved
peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
1 posted 2000-10-25 05:01 PM


This is too real and so well written that I felt the loss deep inside   

Sad, yes, but a very good write.

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-10-25 05:08 PM


Ron K Fox,
Wow what a great write, containing all the elements of life itself. Well done.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

3 posted 2000-10-25 10:56 PM


Thank you so much for your responses. I really appreciate it. Ron
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