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peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
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Texas, USA

0 posted 2000-10-25 10:08 AM


I love the beauty of the night
The feeling of being alone
Yet part of all things
Content washes over me in waves
And all is peace
Drawn to the moon as always
I try to find its secret message
Then smile, bemused at myself
Yet feelings of warmth bathe me
I feel your presence so strongly
And once again you are with me
Attuned for all time, no need for words
Complete now, we walk on
Sharing the dream together


Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

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Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

1 posted 2000-10-25 10:46 AM


It's so nice to read your work, and your heart...just keep them coming. Ron
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-10-25 10:58 AM


~It IS nice indeed. The night can be so beautiful,...as are your words. Thank you. *Peace.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-10-25 12:29 PM


The stars...the moon..and peace all make the
night my very favorite time...this is a
beautiful piece...I enjoyed the theme and
the flow of it very much~

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
4 posted 2000-10-25 01:12 PM


This is such sweet read...very well written...liked it muchly
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-10-25 01:56 PM


Mm, I love this, the night is so good, and it seems all poets love the moon as I do.
Wonderful write.
Sandra

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