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In the light of day
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In the light of day |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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in the light of day You would never fade away I would stand you there forever In the light of day ~~~ Your world would always be a bright one Never fading off to grey For I would always stand you In the light of day ~~~ Darkness would never fall upon you In the light you'd stay For in the light I'd hold you always In the light of day < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-25-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very good sense of longing displayed here yuh |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks dear yuh man  I appreciate your comments tonight (oz time) Tracie~ < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-25-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A beautiful weave Miss Tracie...it shows your heart in every line~ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
What true beauty!!! Such things should always be held in the light and cultivated.... I enjoyed the read  Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Tracie!!! When we hold things to the light. . . they're always more beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Everyones colors shime brighter in the light. What better place to see things more clearly. ron |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bdc Hi girl Thanks for such a sweet reply ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Peppermint~ So glad you enjoyed...thanks Tracie~ Sven~ Hello dear friend You are so right, they are Love Tracie~ Ron~ so true..thanks for a wonderful reply Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ A lovely write of words that cascade from your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Tracie you have no idea how this touched my heart. The longing, the desiring. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. My heart is really moved right now. Hugs sweet friend, Juls |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Juls what a sweet reply, I thank you and appreciate it muchly Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Marge so sorry hon I don't know how I could have missed you there but I did, please forgive Lovely reply...thanks very much Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
If I could stand you in the light of day You would never fade away If only we could! This is lovely Tracie Well Done. "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey sweet DA hi thereThanks hon for your lovely reply...so pleased you came by and enjoyed Love Ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I could stand you in the light of day You would never fade away I would stand you there forever In the light of day ====================== what a cool thought... and ya know what .. YOU look pretty darn good your self in the light of your poetry ... very cool poem Trace ... later-shine on me -gator jm |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked it a lot!!!!!!! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your heart shines brilliantly throught these tender lines Tracie ... very lovely, much enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hello there sweet Janny girl Well my, my what kind words you have for me, I appreciate them so much from you and your time...thanks hon Tracie~ Vandana~ I'm so glad you liked and alot...WOW!!! Thanks very much Tracie~ Kit~ Always such lovely replies..thanks and I'm so glad you liked Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love filled with desire and care... wonderful penned....love it... Charisma |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Charisma~ Hi thanks for your lovely reply, glad you likedTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ Dear heart, this is beautiful!! -SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hello sweet one appreciate your tender reply~HUG~ Tracie~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
*sigh* This is just beautiful "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
taramw~ Hi there so glad you enjoyed...thanks for your sweet replyTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Darkness would never fall upon you In the light you'd stay For in the light I'd hold you always In the light of day I love these words, ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
nakdthoughts~ Hi and welcome to passions Glad you stopped by and enjoyed this poem of mine...thanks alot Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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