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My Love |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
My love for you Will go unknown It shall forever be Hide from the sight of thee You want a friend Not what I want to give unto thee So to this end I will forever hide my love for thee With this I send My love, My heart, and my soul, For you have made my hell Into a heaven with out end But you will never know What you are missing |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The story of unconditional and selfless love Alan...there is nothing more pure than this. Beautiful work~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Alan...this is so sad...so very sad |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very beautifully written, Alan. Sometimes, they just don't know what they're missing, do they? Great poem! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Butterflies.....thank you for your kind words. Paula....it isn't that sad ...really...could be worse.....I could not have her as a friend Snowpants.thank you......you are right....sometimes they don't know.... |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Good on you Alan, these are very true feelings. Cheer up! Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Alan~ Straight from the heart, beautifully written. Glad you're still friends Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alan~ 'So to this end I will forever hide my love for thee' Oh ... you can't hide love ! It shines too brightly to be kept to yourself. Share it with her ... how would she ever know if you don't tell her ? 'you will never know What you are missing' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Daniel......Thank you for reading it...I am fine...it just haunts me at times Tracie66.....thank you...friends are forever...right? Marge.thank you .....but yes, you can hide love and I can live without what I am missing.. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh this is so sad.... how can you hide your love... hope that she will see it, and answer it..... excellent write. Charisma |
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