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A Night Spent With Friends
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A Night Spent With Friends |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Morsels, Like chocolate sins, Delve into, Sugary thoughts. Dipping, Diving, Deliciously craving, The air of memory, That once was lost, In unquenched fires. Melted, Dripping, Moving like wax, To the slow paced lick, Of bonfire flames. Barbeque, And nightime air, Surrounding green lawn chairs. These are the days spent, While Autumn is saying, A long goodbye. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
...and i was saving that napoleon for tomorrow--- Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is an excellent enjoyable read....I'm there!!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
you create a wonderful soothing moment! Ron |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'These are the days spent, While Autumn is saying, A long goodbye.' Another great ending, Temptress! I love it!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Great combination of mood & moment, relaxing and... now I'm craving something chocolate...BRB! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
farewell Autumn. . . we hardly knew thee. . . Wonderful Temptress. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 you have penned this with autumn desire... pleasure to read. Charisma |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WOW!  I didn't expect this many responses to this. Let me just say a gracious thanks to all who have read it so far! I'm glad someone is enjoying my work! *Jenn* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This one went right to my sweet tooth, Temptress  |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Jenn - so I find it with my own posts - some I'm so proud of - getting limited response - others I don't hold in high regard - elicit a flood of compliments. I almost passed this - so glad I didn't. The feeling it gave me only comes from great poetry |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Jenn, a melding of the seasons...lovely work. Most enjoyable. Robert Joseph |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
The first part of this piece sounded very tasty...yum, yum..this is a wonderful piece and I really liked the way it flowed and how you ended it! Peace Nathan |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Temptress, Pleeese bring back Autumn, for I do not wish to see Old Man Winter rear his ugly head, at least to me. Very nice write. Bill |
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