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Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

0 posted 2000-10-24 10:34 PM

Tears that stain

Your love is like rose that’s dying,
All alone in the pouring rain,
The wind will blow,
And the petals fly.
The rose is gone.
But the thorns remain.

You’re waiting for the sun to rise,
To brighten up the cold gray skies.
Yes, the clouds will part.
And the sun will shine,
But you can’t see, because you’ve closed your eyes.

So won’t you look my way.
Only I can ease your pain.
From all the sorrow,
From the tears that stain.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-10-24 10:45 PM

RK~ this is sad.......hope she looks your way.

-SEA

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-10-24 10:57 PM

Beautiful, only a loving heart can ease the pain you speak of. She would be wise to hear yours speaking..
Sandra

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-10-24 11:01 PM

Thank you catalinamoon and sea...It was just a sad memory...things are a lot better. Thanks. Ron

StarGlow
Junior Member

since 2000-10-23

Posts 40

4 posted 2000-10-25 12:33 PM

Touching and heartfelt.
Great write. Star

[This message has been edited by StarGlow (edited 10-25-2000).]

Toddles
Member

since 2000-07-24

Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana

5 posted 2000-10-25 12:36 PM

Well said Ron!

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

6 posted 2000-10-25 01:04 AM

'So won’t you look my way.
Only I can ease your pain.'

It's so hard when we know the answer to their problem, but they just won't let us help. Excellent words, Ron! I really enjoyed it!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2000-10-25 07:23 AM

I liked this, the right look can certainly make a rose bloom again, I love poems about roses! Welcome to the forum

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2000-10-25 09:37 AM

oh I would certainly look your way,
feeling your love through your words.
excellent write.

Charisma

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

9 posted 2000-10-25 04:25 PM

This is a lovely poem Ron.

Thanks

Jon

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

10 posted 2000-10-26 01:27 AM

Im glad things are better now...your words touch deep in my heart an echo

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

11 posted 2000-10-26 02:10 AM

~Beautifully written...As Paula said I am also happy things are better for you!!~

~Cherie~

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