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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-24 09:30 PM


I will sing a song of love and midnight blue
in the carriage of my dreams
in my garden of english ivy and wisteria
May I sing a song for you?

or

would you like to tango in the moonlight?
beneath the pergola
to the song of trickling water
would you like to tango?

or

would you like to make love in the ambiance
of my bedroom?
amongst Gods and Goddesses
of Roman mythology

or

will you sit and let me drown
in your eyes
amongst the whimsical fountains
and my lips of adoring sighs

tell me now..tell me..please do
I think I am falling in love
yes...yes with YOU


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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  


[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-24-2000).]

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EagleOne
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1 posted 2000-10-24 09:38 PM


There is only one possible answer to such a question, a big YES I think.

"will you sit and let me drown
in your eyes"

Love that line!




"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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2 posted 2000-10-24 10:55 PM


More delicious writings..He would me a lucky man, to say yes to all of the above..
Loved this.
Sandra

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3 posted 2000-10-24 10:59 PM


Victoria you are very romantic...James
Victoria
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4 posted 2000-10-25 10:38 AM


Thank you Eagle One..Im glad you didnt make me sing for you ha..you might regret it ha..

Thank you Sandra..so nice of you to say..thanks for peeking in..

James..thank you..only if i dont sing i am ha..

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Charisma
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5 posted 2000-10-25 11:41 AM


who can resist such a romantic offer....
so I guess he can only sing YES

loved it....

Charisma

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6 posted 2000-10-25 12:59 PM


Thank you Charisma..he will if he is a smart man haa..appreciate you comments..

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Paula Finn
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7 posted 2000-10-25 01:08 PM


Who could resist love sung so sweetly?
Victoria
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8 posted 2000-10-25 02:51 PM


Thank you Paula..nice to hear from you..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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