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The Woman That Could Give Me So Much

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 10-24-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

The Woman
That Could Give Me
So Much

What can I say,
"Please give me more."
And isn't that begging
a thought I abhor.
Yes I realize it's hard to
give feelings you possibly don't possess
yet if they dwell within your hearts desire
please go ahead and confess.
It not, that would be my problem
definately not yours.
I'll just have to muster up the courage
to let go and look to another
to provide the love I deserve.
Anyway my life is a definate mess
and thinking of the love I'm missing
has created a little too much stress.
So if that's your desire we can lose touch.
Looks like you are becoming
the woman that could give me so much
that doesn't appreciate me enough
to stay in touch.

Jameslee@October24,2000
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1 posted 10-24-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

James~
If she is blind
then set her free
give your heart
to the likes of me

I will hold you gently
love you long
my heart could never
do you wrong

Find me,I'm waiting
just around life's bend
I'll be the heart that is true
with a love with no end.

-SEA-

She's out there James, you will find her.   -SEA
inot2B
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2 posted 10-24-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

Don't wait too long. If she can't tell you
that your the one, go find one who will.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 10-25-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

James you know what you deserve and what you
want....and you have the strength within you
to wait until it comes...and it will because
of what you want to give in return.  This
was heartfelt and tender writing~
Paula Finn
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4 posted 10-25-2000 12:54 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

Hey my friend...you know and I know...you deserve the very best, so dont hang on to something that isnt, ok?
JamesMichael
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5 posted 10-25-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Sea, inot, Butterflies and Paula...
When you have determined that you care for someone you also must give them the time and the benefit to give the same back to you...I want to give her every opportunity because she is worth it...yet this is a new relationship and I don't really know her that well and if she is not who I expected or responding as well as I would like this relationship could end just as quickly as it began...I sincerely hope that doesn't happen..still one can not fall in love all by themselves...the best policy is to give only as much as the other desires from you..so if she only wants to be my friend...I will make adjustments...James
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6 posted 10-25-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

James, beautiful poem, very difficult time. I can only say what I truly believe that real love, true love, is worth any price. Whatever will be, will be, I'll keep my fingers crossed for you. (And if she really doesn't know what a true pize she has then maybe she's reaaly not the person you fell in love with.)
Take care
                 Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
JamesMichael
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Thank you Marsha for the kind words...James
 
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