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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-24 09:05 AM


Raindrops fall kissing the earth
lavender bouquet in the air
the wind not still sweeping the hills
with the broom of affection and care

Dusting the environment
and polishing with dew
is the keeper of the kingdom
and the gardner of yew

Chandelier stars shining bright
lighting the way..for this lady and knight

Under the sword of darkness
are bugles of sweet harkness

Beneath golden archways..hand in hand
into the sand castle of fantasyland


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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  


[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-24-2000).]

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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2000-10-24 12:11 PM


sweet and serene very nice o yuh
Victoria
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2 posted 2000-10-24 12:47 PM


Thank you so much Walt..and for reading.

                       ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-10-24 01:02 PM


Fantasylands are reached everyday by those of the mindset of pure in heart.  So why does it seem that the free admission costs so much for those that seek it rather than those that shun it.  One of the perplexities of life I suppose.  Excellent write.
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2000-10-24 01:31 PM


Victoria,
A pretty and sweet poem.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-10-24 02:03 PM


Lovely. I see you have the medievel dreams I do. If only..
Sandra

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6 posted 2000-10-24 02:37 PM


I think because the ones who seek it are probably married haa....for some unknown reason...thank you Mark..im glad you enjoyed..

Seymour..thank you..nice to hear from you

Sandra..Sometimes i think not experiencing it at all is for the best.. thank you for reading Sandra  

               ~Victoria~

              


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Denise
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7 posted 2000-10-24 08:07 PM


Enchanting, Victoria!

Denise

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