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Losing Control |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Losing Control Oh baby what have you done with me, I'm losing control, cause you are on my mind, Please tell me, is this really love what I see Drifting away, when I'm leaving the ground, Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ This is simply lovely ! It flows so softly and gently ... a real treat to read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Must face the truth that I'm falling in Love with you." Yes it is nice to fall in Love. James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, Delightful. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~Marge~ thank you, I am glad that you like it  jmlee: I agree with you...to fall in love is heavenly Kethry: thank you for your delight comment. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lofted into the heavens with no hope nor wish of returning to earth. It is a wonderful feeling indeed. Superb write. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mark: yes it is a wonderful feeling...I can recommend that, but unfortunally have the earth one hell of a magnet, and so I must return to it, if I like it or not. I'm glad that you liked it. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It sure makes me soar when I read it!!! This says it just right....beautiful!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you peppermint...I am glad that you like it...... thanks for your reply |
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LoriJaye Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 34Massachusetts USA |
So expressive - and captures well that feeling of finally letting go and accepting that, yes, I am in love again... =) LJ "A smile is when your inner beauty comes outside." |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, This is magic love, if there is such a thing. There is such wonderful feelings here. "I'm losing control, cause you're on my mind...I'm fighting against it but must face the truth...That I'm falling in love with you." Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sweetly written...lovely |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Hope you continue to fly, it's amazing, I love it. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
So sensitive and sincere with a touch of innocent helplessness... I LIKE THIS  BeautifulStrive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
LoriJay: great that you are in love, and recognize this sweet feelings. Daniel: love Is Magic... Paula: thank you for your reply Irish Rose: yes love is amazing...it containt so many feelings Thunderkyss: you are right, that's the way I am. glad that you like it [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Well done. I enjoyed. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
effigy: thank you, I am glad that you enjoyed it. |
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