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Could It Be? |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Seems these days Every song is inspiring; I wear a constant smile. Or could it be The light in your eyes Has lifted my heart? Is it possible Your face improves my perspective? I'm not sure, darling, But whatever it is In your countenance, Has taken my heart Out of its despair And placed it onto this cloud. I've never been higher; I've never been more at peace. Where did you come from? I need to find that place-- It's got to be The most tranquil place conceivable. Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sounds to me like you have those love colored glasses on SP....great view you've got here! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yes..I've felt this before. This is a beautiful expression of such a state of mind or heart!  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
butterflies: yeah, you know how it is!  Thanks for reading!Temptress: well, thanks! I'm glad you liked it!  sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi snowpants, Oh, so nice and upbeat, positive. Good writing. Enjoyed Marcy |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SP, Well done again my dear friend across the miles. Keep them coming. "I need to find that place- It's got to be The most tranquil place conceivable" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED IT A LOT!!!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Happy, and flowing. Perfect poem of love. Sandra |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
You've captured this feeling well, nice read. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
this - I needed today - you pushed doubt away - revived my hopes that sometimes get shuttled behind trees while we go about everyday living - thank you; |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
oh yes! I enjoyed this very much!!! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Marcy: hi, there. Thank you for stopping by and giving your nice comments! glad you enjoyed it! Daniel: well, thank you, my good friend! I'm glad you liked it! vandana: thanks for reading! Sandra: thanks for stopping by, too! glad you liked it!! Gemini: thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed!! Wilfred: I'm honored to know that this has touched you and made your day a little brighter! Thank you for reading!! Snow: thanks! I'm glad you liked it!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
hey---hey you---you get off of my cloud!----- beautifully done Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thanks, Jamie, for your great response! I'm glad you liked this!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
sp...ooohh yeah...it does sound like you are floating a mile high |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, Paula, just the thought of the subject of this poem does have that effect on me. Thanks for reading!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
isn't love wonderful...everything just seems alright. you see the world in a different perspective. Happy for you. Ron |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
SP-- this is very special and beautiful. i am glad you have found someone who makes you feel this way. love is so wonderful...here's to making it last. i wish you lots of love, happiness, and joy. beautiful read! take care ~amy~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Ron: thank you, my friend, for reading!! Amy: I'm glad you stopped by! Thanks!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
walking up on could nine are we? nice poem, I can definitely relate. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Yes, I can relate too, such a wonderful feeling; not quite floating but soaring high!!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So could it be? Sounds as if you have found the proper song for sure. What a wonderful feeling I have now just from reading this one. Lovely write my friend. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Keith: yes, and thanks for the nice comments! peppermint: glad you stopped by! thanks!! Mark: well, I am glad you enjoyed this and got a good feeling out of it. Thanks, my friend, for stopping by to read!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those special people can put those lovely songs in our hearts! Beautiful poem! Denise |
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