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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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falling falling falling free flailing fighting gravity oh dear god (it's all of me) a-pummeling to ground. flying flying flying free feathers frosted fluttering oh dear god (beware of me) shatter--barriers of sound. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Wow girlie...you had me free falling right along side of you here...excellent work... whaaaaaaaaa I wanna write like this!!!  My dear friend need I say it??? Yes I need.... This was Awesome!!!!! Love ya! |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Serenity, I could tell you how well-written or artistic or clever this is, but that would overshadow the fact of how much I just friggin’ LOVED it. I’m saving this one, thanks  .~ Beth I hate quotations. Tell me what you know. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
wooohoooo Sista! You go girl! Just loved this "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
karen keep taking whatever it is you are taking ....sheesh ..really very creative ....and (from yesterday) do you really need to ask why i haven't badgered you to post in CA..lol? I wanna stay friends yanno and i have this horrible jekyll and hyde character transformation ...... nope you don't wanna see the monster i become once i pass through those grave and gloomy portals P |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Holly---you're so funny...thanks for the fun of your company!!! and thanks for reading, as always...Love to you. Beth---I thank you...was just trying to get some fun out of my moodiness---thank you for that "hit" of inspiration---maybe I'll get some whiskey and do Hemingway tonite...LOL Maree--I thank you much my sista! I've been looking real hard at your work lately,(sheesh, can ya tell? I hope so!!) working on it, lady! Philip? SMOOCHES!!! And it's unbloody likely that you could drag me into CA!!! I still owe Nan a Paradelle in the workshop!!! Somebody remind me to stop volunteering! Thanks, m'friend... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
W O O H O O ! ! ! Did I mention that I like this one?? LOL great one my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So is there no solid surface in sight? I truely hope not. Awesome indeed and a thrill to say the least. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sven---thanks so much for the woo-hoo! I appreciate you reading, m'friend, very much. Mark angelheart---where y'been? Good to hear from you lovie, and thank you also for reading...I'm off, now, to do the same.... Thank you much, forum people! This was a bit different for me, but to paraphrase t.s. eliot---"ya never know how far you can go, unless you're willing to go too far..." Love ya'll lots! |
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