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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
emptiness emits flowing from deep down where wishes once occupied violet visions suddenly stemming living like passion's portal beginning by caressing carefully hurting hearts gracefully gather ambitions around my memories tarnished treasures jaded journey neverending needs images inside quip quietly kindly keeping zestful zeal yearning yonder until upon rivers run xenophobic x-rays Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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LoriJaye Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 34Massachusetts USA |
I once tried to do what you have wonderfully accomplished here. I believe my attempt still sits forlornly in my "Work in Progress" folder *sigh* Enjoyed this! Poetic Alphabet soup - YUM! Nothing finer... =) LJ "A smile is when your inner beauty comes outside." |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Wow. This is really good. Maybe I should try one. passion is life. . . |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Simple, eloquent and elegant. (I should have used two "S'S" in a row, eh? What is especially magical is that the message is firmly intact, so the artistry of the writing along with the science of the form are blended into an amazing orchestration.... THANK YOU! Julie I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn live true to their purpose. After 5 years working with the Severely Mentally Ill in County Mental Health, I gave up the bureaucracy (and safe, secure blanket) of this environment to pursue my own purpose and passion. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Wow ! WONDERFULLY worded ! You did this with artistic style. Very tight and extremely well executed. GO GIRL ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hey!! No fair using the dictionary!!  This was excellent. . . really good. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LW~ Wonderful piece...well done my friend I don't think I will attempt this  winged ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wonderful style*.....and *wonderful words* I am glad to stop by, to enjoy your Alphabetical Pondering. Charisma |
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