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0 posted 2000-10-23 02:04 PM



"Hallowe'en"

In cashmere clouds
of greenest grey
while willows weave
and grasses sway
as one we tread
into the mists
with fear and dread
our hypnotists


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1 posted 2000-10-23 02:46 PM


Rainy~ this made me think of being a little kid out trick or treating, kinda scared, but having a blast.   -SEA Great poem!!
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Yes, very well done!  

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



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3 posted 2000-10-23 07:22 PM


SEA, that's exactly what prompted me to write it ~ thoughts of trick or treating. What fun, eh?

Elizabeth, thank you for reading. A bit spooky, but just a wee bit, I think!

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