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Flames Of Love In The Morning
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Flames Of Love In The Morning |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Flames Of Love In The Morning As the sun paints the sky with morning hue The pink and gold streak across azure blue Your morning smile reflected in your feathered kiss My foolish heart flips over and threatens to miss I'm enthralled with you as I can ever be Oh my love please tell me what you've done to me? My eyes are open, can't pretend to be asleep You stole my heart, my soul is yours to keep Your breath soft as a whisper fans my heated cheek Please beloved tell me, show me what I seek Encased in lovers warmth I slowly, surely simmer While your eyes bathes my skin in liquid shimmer The steam that rises with lovers private dawn Wreathes our bodies like mist in the early morn Rising against you as you play our lovers song My skin heats up, I show you for what I long I'm urging the pace, and speeding the rate Smiling you show me how tempting the bait This flame of passion you so effortlessly evoke Building the fires within that only you can stoke I'm mindless with no sense to save my soul With you I'm me, feel free I need no other role Flames lick our skin as heat piles on heat Until release, surcease, comes within a heartbeat Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whew...is that sizzling I hear in the background? Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ok, big sis........ Now we all know why you are always late for work!!!! Yes......this one got me going this morn, and warmed things up a bit!! Oh...will write you as soon as my email stops goofing off....there's a bit of a technical glitch, but they will fix it soon. See ya' later!  Follow your dream! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have beautiful mornings..James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, sizzeling, are you sure? Someone must be cooking!! Glad you liked it love, and I can recommend it to get your day going with a brilliant start.  Hi lil sis, so it warmed you up Mmmm, good I'm glad it struck a chord! Ahh well there's a good reasoon to be late, and now all I have to do is think of it! Speak to you soon love.  James Mmm wonderful mornings, and afternoons and............ Glad you liked it Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
This is just the kind of morning that we all should have. I really like this. passion is life. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*fanning himself* WOW!!! Talk about a way to start the day!!! This was great Marsha. . . and Sunshine, I'm positive that is sizzling you hear!!  ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ The entire poem was lovely, but for some reason this little piece jumped out at me - 'My foolish heart flips over' Just enjoyed the thought of it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Passions Voice, glad you like this, thanks for replying. It's much appreciated.  Sven, thank you, really glad you liked this. Sizzeling, surely not, unless it's me? Maybe I've been standing a little too close to the flames? Yes that'll be it, you know what happens when marshmellow gets to near fire, it melts. Marge, actually I like that line too, because that's exactly what happens. Thank you for your kind reply, and I'm pleased you stopped by. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, what a way to start the day. What a way to start my poetry reading for the night. Hot, Hot Hot, girl. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, really? Well this is Kent love, anything to save on the heating bills!! I'm glad it warmed you up love, it's certainly keeping me warm. (and a better way to keep warm I can't imagine) Thanks for reading you know how I value your opinion.Take care Marsha |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Charisma, are you sure you can hear sizzling? Well maybe I've just got used to the sound of the fire burning, or maybe I can't hear it over the sound of fireworks going off. Glad you liked it Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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