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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-10-23 11:38 AM


My home away from home

When daylight leaves inviting night
And lights the magic moon to bright
The dreamer dreamers and phantoms fly
And ghostly kingdoms come to vie.

Without a wait or walk or steer
From site to site you will appear.
The situations come alive
And every one you will survive.

A place where lovers often meet
A fix where wishes come complete.
A Disney world of time and space.
A fairy land of peace and grace.

And I, of all have learned its way
And make its world my world of play
A place I love a place I roam
It is my home away from home.

No cost or care to take you there
A wish upon a star the fare.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-10-23 11:51 AM


Ah Sy...Disney dreams delight all fairies and pixies alike...

I shan't ever stop wishing upon your star...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



Corinne
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2 posted 2000-10-23 12:23 PM


I know where you go, I go there too,
and when I do, I know I'll see you!

Corinne

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2000-10-23 12:47 PM


Sy....
Such a magical place....penned from a wizard of words......captivating!!


Follow your dream!


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2000-10-23 03:26 PM


Sunshine,
Love you too.

Corinne,
See you there. *L*

Sunny1,
Thank you sweet, what a wonderful graphic.

Charisma
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5 posted 2000-10-23 05:58 PM


hey I also recognize this place...
the fairy land of peace and grace...
it allowed me to leave all behind...
enlighten the weight thats teasing my mind....
love this fairy land of peace and grace...
thought that it was my precious secret place.

thank you for the smile that you brought up to me, reading your post....love it...and enjoyed it....great work

Charisma

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2000-10-23 09:50 PM


Charisma,
Glad I could bring a smile to your face, thank you for the read and comment.

Temptress
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7 posted 2000-10-23 10:07 PM


I have a home away from my home away from homes. Isn't it amazing how everyone's differ in the most unique of ways?   This was a beautiful poem, and I'm glad I got the chance to read it!

*Jenn*


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Nan
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8 posted 2000-10-24 07:35 AM


Now this sounds like my kinda place...I like it, Sy..
BSC
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9 posted 2000-10-24 07:48 AM


Simply enchanting Seymour!  Bonnie
Kethry
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10 posted 2000-10-24 07:50 AM


Sy,
sounds like magic to me.

be well
Keth.


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2000-10-24 02:17 PM


Temptress,
Thank you so much for the read and like.

Nan,
I made it up special for you. *L*

BSC,
THanks for the enchanting.

Kethry,
Wonderful gif, thanks.

Wilfred Yeats
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12 posted 2000-10-24 02:43 PM


I'm wishing - I'm wishing already - ~S~ - truly - I felt the magic  - well done!
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2000-10-24 07:39 PM


Wilfred,
Thank you for the well done.

Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 2000-10-24 07:50 PM


This is so lovely
Like the dream of a child
Magical and beautiful
Liz

RainbowGirl
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15 posted 2000-10-24 07:58 PM


And there was me travelling from star to star and I bumped into this...

HUGS

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2000-10-24 09:41 PM


Elizabeth,
Are we not all children? This child thanks you. Love Sy

Rainbow,
It was nice bumping into you.

Temptress
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17 posted 2000-10-24 10:32 PM


I keep reading this, and keep liking it.   It seems it gives me new thoughts each time I read.  
Martie
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18 posted 2000-10-24 10:36 PM


Sy--You always have magic in your writing...and I love magic!
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