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You the Magnet To My Soul
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You the Magnet To My Soul |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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You The Magnet To My Soul With just a word or a simple look You read me so well, just like a book As a moth is drawn to a burning flame You draw me to you just the same Whether or not I'm doing things right I can't stay away from you and your light You are a dangerous as a gun to me Even more perilous than the raging sea I drown forever in your stormy eyes A kiss from you sends me flying high As for your hands they hold a magic touch Without you here I miss you far too much I've dived into this sea of lovers bliss I'd go anywhere for just one small kiss Your smile turns me into a raving fool One glance I can feel the magnetic pull i'm spinning around totally out of control Oh why did you have to capture my soul? For myself I've lost every ounce of self will Which I think is my lifes bitterest pill My heart and spirit are now yours to govern I've lost all reason, I'm become stubborn Like a magnet attracts with a powerful force You hold me captive and my soul of course Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yep...love and madness, I sometimes wonder if there is a difference. Eloquently expressed, Marsha, and yes, I remember it well. Thank you. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marsha-- excellent poem. you expressed these feelings right on the mark my friend! love can be a crazy crazy thing lol but the ride is worth it in my eyes  take care. amy  |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Marsha, passion is indeed a ''magnet'' and in your words we experience its power. Very nice. Robert Joseph |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Serenity, thank you, yes madness that's it exactly. Glad you like it  Amy, the ride is definitely worth it, although sometimes I wish it was a little less like riding an untamed horse. A lot of bumps, much jumping about, and a rather strange feeling inside. Robert, glad you like it, thanks for stopping by. Take care Marsha< !signature--> Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds intense!!! Love can be a powerful magnet indeed. Wonderful write from you today. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, glad you dropped by, Mmmm I think that's a fairly good description. I'm pleased you liked it. ;> Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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