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the last of his innocence
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the last of his innocence |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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his body pulsating with the last of his innocence, he encircles her in his arms. touching caressing her with an aching passion... his hunger burns needful. holding her close he feels her body begin to move in succesion with his. he feels his skin sweat. her velvet fingertips become smoldering steel slicing open wounds in his back, sharp teeth nip his shoulder. a pounding in his head; his heart-- the mine explodes... shattering the last of his innocence... 5-90 -dgvarner my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ahhh....innocence lost, but experience gained! Another of life's lessons that we learn...... Great writing, as you always do, my friend!  Follow your dream! |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Dgvarner, I want you to title every single thing I write... his body pulsating with the last of his innocence GOD I wish I'd written this first. Fabulous, as always... ~Beth |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I remember this moment...and you wrote it perfectly |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee, wow, this is as always really really great, the loss of innocence. Pure poetry love, and do I love this, what do you think? Yes loud applause, and arm loads of bouquets, as you so richly deserve. So well written lov, utter class. Take care Bubbles  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ok, why is this on Page 4?? This is excellent dg. . . soft, sensual. . . I love it. . . Wonderful. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sunny..ahh..sweet experience...  beth..LOL most of my poems dont even have titles! i have to give them one to post it in passions! bubbles.."pure poetry".."utter class"?? those are for me??? gee.....sven..i was already on page 4?? my, how fast we move..i thank you sir for bringin me back sincere thanks to all of you for your very wonderful replies!!  hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
paula!! i'm so sorry i missed you! many thanks to you too hugs, dg |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
But I swear I'm a born again virgin. So blow my mind....  Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LOL...parker, love...only your mind?? hugs, dg |
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