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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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fresh leaves < !signature-->clique in piles swept by wild wind’s caprice trailing whimsy so transfigured by the whole portico while they procreate in corners turning & twirling dancing in multiple pairs across the floor of soils softened flesh who can say what they possibly know yet Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-22-2000).] |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
I crunch and rake them...you turn them into beautiful poetic images. wonderful! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Hay PS, Nice to hear from you... You got some things posted yet..? I got to go right now and take a look. thnax 4 noticing. dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I feel the wind here, and see the colors flying - and then I stop and think about your double-meanings, which sets my mind off into yonder corridors of dreaming ... You know how I love the leaves, anyway, and the snow. And YOU ! ! ! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ Firstly ... I LOVE the title ! Nextly .... you painted the canvas with the colors of fall ... literally ! Such dynamic beauty in your writes. Capricious little pirouetting ballerinas dance. You rake ! Errr ... I meant rock ! I did mean rock !  ROCK ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey Lucky--I have seen leaves procreate in corners too...they do this little twirly dance..yup...and gestation is just a couple of seconds....Hugs! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
clique in piles swept by wild wind’s caprice trailing whimsy so transfigured by the whole portico while they procreate in corners turning & twirling dancing ============= wonderful images and very poetic and unique vocabulary choices here lucky ... very cool indeed.. been a long time since I seen the word portico ... excellent creative write. take care jm |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Rosemary, I'll always love you Marge, Your right... I rake. Martie, That's what you get for having such a big yard. I think for my next writing I'll just glue some on the paper and see how it leaves. Janet, I guess you got some of them there leaves hanging around your place too. thank you all... dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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