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It's Wild In Here
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It's Wild In Here |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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It's Wild In Here No one's been saved or sanctioned or held, and pages torn, blew, escaped from you, your smiles, so wide, afraid of the day, of simple words around, times two, times washing through, tides, ashore rushing foam, alone, running wild, weeping loud, alive here but dying, breathing, crying, wild,...It's wild in here, wind blown and frantic, tassled alive, here, in my seconds, remaining. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SF, What a stream of emotions here my friend. You are in my thoughts . . . always. Here is hoping that things are fine with you. Please take care you. Nice writing.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Fire, I like this free flowing stream. Bit worried about the end though "in the seconds I have left" Be well Keth Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SpitFire~ this felt frantic and afraid and out of control.......not sure if that's right but it is a great read. -SEA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey you, this did have that kind of stressed out sound to it. Spoken from one very stressed person to another, be well, and write on. This is one of those poems that pulls you along onto the ride.. S |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LW, they will be someday, huh? Thanks chicki for reading me. ~Keth, no, no worrying for you. None. So stop. . You're so cool K. Thanks. ~SEA, Beautiful mam. Just that. Right on. Thank you. ~Cat, two peas we are. argh. *sigh* Thank you gurl, for everything. *Peace all. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You got my motor running, lady...my heart did that funny thing where it feels like it's beating twice at once...and how'd you slip this one by me? Excellent as always! |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Wonderfull. I loved it, so moving. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Frantic and stressful but so well written. Slow down and take a deep breath....there ya go, now come play in the sunshine and if there is none there, just visit here as there is plenty. |
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