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Wildflowers on the Wind... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Wildflowers on the Wind Orchids and roses, fragrant and rare are not like this lady, so do not try to compare she admires the view, would breathe in one or two but she's more at home, under skies of blue where the winds blow, and meadowlarks sing and wildflowers grow 'round in a ring sturdy tensile strength, hidden from view emotional outlets? she has one or two a slave to lovely sounds, by music or word she's drawn back to dreams, to be reassured where the winds blow, and meadowlarks sing and wildflowers grow 'round in a ring so she would pick wildflowers, cornflowers blue smell in the lupine, soft purpling hues and her garden would grow gentian all along and be content by the spring, with a cardinal's song where the winds blow, and meadowlarks sing and wildflowers grow 'round in a ring she's not of lace, more of broadcloth blue she doesn't wear silk, bluejeans will do but her smile is genuine, 'tho she'll never laugh at you but more at herself, it's what she will do where the winds blow, and meadowlarks sing and wildflowers grow 'round in a ring so don't be amazed if she has mercurial eyes and don't ask if her love is a great surprise as it's in her to hunker down in your heart for there is no naiveté where her love starts where the winds blow, and meadowlarks sing and wildflowers grow 'round in a ring Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I sensed a fairy like mist around these words, they are lovely! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ What beauty ! 'so don't be amazed if she has mercurial eyes' I wouldn't be at all surprised ! This is soooooooooooo lovely ... just as you are ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it..makes me want to dance haa..  ~Victoria~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Wonderful and he will be, where the winds blow, and meadowlarks sing and wildflowers grow 'round in a ring. *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can hear the minstrels dancing around the shire now. . . Just beautiful Karilea. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This poem is absolutely lovely! What a treat! Wonderfully worded. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kathleen...yes, there is... Marge, there's always a line for you... Victoria, then I succeeded... Sy, yes, he will...{~,^} Sven, you too?... Rosemary, thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A delicate weave from your pen to our hearts...this is beautiful writing~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Butterflies, this one liked me too... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Sunshine, This is written to sing, read aloud!! It takes me back to a kid again. Marcy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marcy, it tickles me that you think so...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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