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Lifes Repeating
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Life keeps changing Rearranging I am still the same People leave me Some deceive me Some find me to blame Heart betrays me Time delays me Lost and no one knows And all the lies Of all the highs Hide my constant lows Want tomorrow Forget sorrow Take comfort in dreams No use thinking Fighting sinking Heavier it seems Smile lonely Happy only With what I once had Heart keeps beating Life’s repeating Cycles all too sad |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Kevin..you certainly have a wonderful rhythm going there..loved it..keep writing ..  i thought it was great ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Hey Kevin, Life will only let you down if you allow it to. Live for now, for today. Tomorrow, is very far away, and yesterday ain't here. Cheers my friend, grasp now. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ah, such words of wisdom from a poet's young heart, yes, it's all true! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Thank you Victoria, I appreciate it Daniel, Every day I live to make it to tomorrow, I look back at yesterday and see nothing, Someday Is the only day I have left Young But Lived Rose, thanks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ Each tomorrow we make it to is one more chance to rearrange our lives. Tomorrow became today - and someday looms on the horizon ! Smile ... it becomes you ! Good to see you here, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is an excellent expression, Kevin. So nice to see you here again! Denise |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kevin-- as always your writing touches me deep within. this poem is no exception. first excellent rhyming. but more importantly the message behind this is fantastic. apparently you have seen and experienced a lot in your short life. from one young poet to another...i understand. take care m'friend. excellent piece! ~amy~ p.s. never lose sight of tomorrow but live for today. for today is really all any of us have. *smiles* to ya."The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Marge I smiled when I saw your reply, Thank you they are few and far between recently Im a quiet observer d but im always around, reading, and learning Thanks amy, I appreciate your understanding, Thats what I need the most right now |
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