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just to be with you. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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sunlight on this plane you and I are separated by time and by space but still your light fills my heart warms my soul gives me peace and I stand here on this ground in adoration of your beauty longing to be there in the sky with you to be a cloud a bird a breeze just to be near you but sunlight on that plane you and I are joined by love and by dreams and still your touch fills my spirit caresses my heart gives me passion and I stand here on this plane in adoration of your beauty longing to be here with you for eternity to be a traveler a seeker a teller just to be with you ----------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 10-21-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ 'to be a traveler a seeker a teller just to be with you' Positively BEAUTIFUL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Sven, I think you have the market on tender, beautiful poetry. This is so soft. Perfect! Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Sven, you have such a way with words. May you find a love that will appreciate your special talent. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've done it yet again Sven! You've woven such a tender and romantic tribute to love. Beautiful thoughts in this incredibly lovely verse!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Oh Sven, you're a hopeless romantic! And I love it! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Sven, A most beautiful writing, and the romantic in you shows. Thanks for sharing this. Bill |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh my Sven, yes this is certainly romantic. I'm amazed by the tenderness of this piece, just so soft and gentle. As always, Juls |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is beautiful sven..a poem of much longing... hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven, this is truly beautiful, pure and lovely. Oh I do like this one Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A romantic poem at it's finest full of optimism! Take care, Melissa honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Sven, the light of love can certainly coexist with distance, time, and physical boundaries. Thank you for sharing this pretty poem. Rainydays |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marge, you're positively WONDERFUL!! Thank you my friend. . . Tara, I wouldn't say the market. . . let's just say that I have a section. . . . . . thank you. . .inot2b, I share your wish with you my friend. . . thank you Kit, thank you. . .I am glad that you enjoyed this one. . . Passing Shadows, yes, I am hopeless aren't I?  . . .thank you my friend. . .Afternoon Bill, thank you for reading, and for your words my friend. . . Juls, thank you. . . I am glad that you liked this. . . dg, much longing indeed my friend. . .thank you. . . Marsha, thank you my friend. . . Melissa, and hope too!! Don't forget about hope! Thank you. . . Rainydays, it can not only coexist with them, it can reach beyond them. . . thank you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"You and I are joined by love and by dreams." "and I stand here on this ground in adoration of your beauty longing to be there in the sky with you." Wonderful expression of romantic admirations..James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven-- as always you touch the heart deep within. your writing is lovely as ever. and makes me sigh! thanks for always posting such beautiful work. heart melting. take care. amy |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~sigh~ Sven so romantically beautiful my friend, swept me away with your thoughts when I read something like this I never want to come down...well written~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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