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Garden of Romance |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Will we meet in the sunshine? under the mulberry tree Or meet in seclusion of night? all of this time, I have wondered what will, what will it be like? Will my heart still ponder? all alone in our rendezvous our secret garden of romance at last, I will be alone with you Our silhouettes will embrace entwined on satin sheets of blue on the wallpaper of discreet in the mirror of breathless hue I will count each hour and minute until the final hour arrives wrapped in your arms my love will the passion in the night survive? Together we will surrender to once was just fantasy you and I my belove call me, by my name..Destiny A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, I like this, especially the last line. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Veronica, this is breathtaking! Very lovely! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ My this is lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Destiny..... What a way to end such a beautiful poem. You make hearts beat at speeds unknown. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Victoria, This was just delightful to read, and very lovely. I enjoy your writings. Bill |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Kethry..so glad you enjoyed..thank so much for peeking in..  thank you Denise..I always appreciate your responses my friend.. thank you Marge..im flattered that you think so ...nice to hear from you.. thank you JD..well i dont know what to say..haa..what a wonderful comment.. thank you bill..i enjoy your writings too..a mutual admiration society here haa.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ah yes, a garden...the perfect place to share love. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Irish Rose..so glad you enjoyed. always nice to hear from you ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* ~love is so beautiful...and always full with desire and anticipation, and I can feel that through your words... Beautiful piece. Charisma |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Simply beautiful, you must be in love! I loved the last stanza Take care, Melissa honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Personally, I'd rather call you Victoria. . . This was wonderful Victoria. . . a walk in the garden. . . my favorite place. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can not resist a rendezvous in the Garden of Romance. I am excited, I am thrilled...my flight leaves in 15 minutes...a five hour flight...til then think of me my Love...ha..oops I don't even know the location...arriving LAX at midnight...til then I am thinking of those kisses...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Charisma..thank you so much..i am so glad you peeked in today and i do appreciate your kind words.. thank you Melissa..This is a repost from another forum i use to write in..i wrote in the beginning of the year..alot has happened since then  Sven..Thank you but you can call me anything you want haa.. James..Now James i told you we must be discreet...now you have told the whole damn world haa..MEN..cant live with them and cant live without them..haa.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Very intriguing! I liked this one a lot! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i didnt see you sneak in Rosemary haa..thank you so much..appreciate your comments.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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GreyMouser Junior Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 17 |
Very nice V although I have been stung in gardens and pricked by a thorn or two...*s* (hugs) Mike |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
There are plenty more gardens Mike..haa.. and there is a bee no matter where you go haa...HUGS..thanks for reading .. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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