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Thunder Rumbles [there's a song in here...somewhere...]
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Thunder Rumbles [there's a song in here...somewhere...] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Thunder Rumbles It's too late for spring rain the fall has come it's too late for growth of grain the fall has come it's too late but skies now fill and thunder rolls along white gray blackened clouds now whirl and the thunder rolls but it's too late for us [boom boom] too late for us it's too late for us [boom boom] and the thunder rolls [boom boom] and the rumble rolls [boom boom] come again you, yesterday come again you now come again you yesterday come and see just how it's too late for us too late for us [boom boom] too late for us [boom boom] and the rumble rolls Simon's in my heart Simon's in my soul it's too late for us and the thunder rolls and the rumble rolls CD played strong and long CD played it loud CD played Simon's song and I'll bet he's proud but it's too late for us [boom boom] too late for us [boom boom] the beat goes on and it's too late for us [boom boom] If you could hear this beat and hear the drummin' song before long you'd tap your feet and spread this song along but it's too late for us [boom boom] too late for us [boom boom] it's too late for us [boom boom] and the rumble rolls and the rumbles rolls ~~~~~~~~~~ and the rumble ~~~~~~~~~~ rolls. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ WOW ! Felt the rumble heard the song Grabbed me singing took me along Sent me scurrying for cover Thunder rolls in constant hover But it's never too late it's never too late Boom - boom crashing sealed our fate It's never too late It's never too late *Well, my stars ... look what you went and did ! Thank you poet ! I guess I'd have to confess to hearing this one loud and strong. Wonderful job, Karilea. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karilea, there is not only a song in there, I heard it and now the music's in my head aaaaarrgh! Absolutely, fabulously, lyrically mastered piece. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, I heard it loud and strong, amazing, I really like this, no I love this. What did I say, full to the brim with talent, how can you doubt that!! This screams class, absolutely shouts it from the rooftops. This is a great poem, it truly is. Take care Marsha  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love the (boom, boom). . . This was wonderful Sunshine. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, this will have to be a song someday...the tune won't leave my head... Kethry, thank you little one...that means a lot... Marsha! Talent? Moi? ... Well, maybe if I practice and practice... Sven...the [boom boom] is incessant! Help! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
hhhmmmmm...me thinks you have a need to listen to Chad Brock's "Lightning Does The Work". Either that or you have been listening to it already. This is beautiful and it should be a song. I do love a good storm and this one sounds like one heck of a good one. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No Mark, I don't know the song you refer to, maybe I should listen first, and decide if this rates as a song later... thanks for reading... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunshine- oh yes...a song indeed. got my toes tappin' and a tune runnin' through my head. this is great!  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
boom boom...i hear it. need i say more? |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Argh...I hate it when I get a song stuck in my head! But I think I won't mind singing this one for awhile... (Watch tonite at my friend's I'll just bust out with "It's too late for us [boom boom]" and they're gonna be like "What the-?!")Beautiful poem, got me thinking of storms and Garth Brooks. Much love all, Krissie ~*Those words... Oh, how I long to hear ...those words Tell me...*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhhhhh Sunshine........this is really a boom boom poem....I love it... and I had to think on Paul Simon....he have that too.....you know the boom....boom.... was once on a concert from him....and I can still hear the boom.....boom.... *LOL*.....I really enjoyed it your poem.. Charisma |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I want to thank everyone who has responded. Paul Simon's The Rhythm of the Saints is partly responsible for this piece...if you haven't heard this CD, I would vote for you to go borrow it or locate it...well worth listening to! Vicky, there's indeed the "tap tap" of the beat! You've got it! Ron, no, you need not... AniKay, I wish you could hear the song that plays in my head!...I can't get rid of it...[note to self: contact brother who's in the music biz...] Charisma...I won't trade you my Neil Diamond experience, but the next time you know there's a Simon concert...clue me in... thank you everyone... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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