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Nan
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0 posted 2000-10-21 08:19 AM


One fateful day down "By the Sea"
Deer, Sy, and LngJhnAg
Imbibed a bit too much to see
They'd turned to scalawags.

Sy found himself smacked 'midst the three
'Pon left cheek Balladeer
On right LngJhn concurrently
Sy needed one more beer.




Course LngJhn thought decidedly
That this could be more fun
If in betwixt it might be he
Beware that silver tongue.

Tale's told these days you'll likely see
Him 'bout the countryside.
Else soon as naught he's bound to be
Awaft upon the tide.

I found him here just recently
Sails furling back and forth
Reciting pirate's poetry
His ship's stern headed north

With Lorelei and much Chablis
They stopped to stomp grape pod
At Martha's Vineyard Winery
Abreast of Old Cape Cod.

Then LngJhnAg did smile with glee
'Twas time to launch his plan.
Besmacked by Lorelei and me
Two ladies smooching man...

The lasses thought mischievously,
"Let's take this far and near"
In chants of musing harmony,
"All righty - Next comes Deer"





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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2000-10-21 08:23 AM


Morning Nancy,

You are certainly very talented, not only in your writings, but also with your manipulation with the computer. A very great posting Nancy, keep them coming.

Bill

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2 posted 2000-10-21 08:26 AM


Nan, nobody told me about the smack-a-ton. WOnderful poem Nan, save a place for me next time LOL

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

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3 posted 2000-10-21 08:27 AM


Nan~
WONDERFUL !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2000-10-21 08:38 AM


Hey, where do I get in line at?  
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-10-21 08:40 AM


Wonderful poem and pics Nan! What a treat to "see" as well as read of these tales ... the genuine comraderie shines through in both pictures and words ... loved this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kethry
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6 posted 2000-10-21 09:01 AM


Nan,
Fabulous, both the pics and the poem.
be well
Kethry


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Gail Sheehy

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7 posted 2000-10-21 10:10 AM


CUTE!!!!    
Nan
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8 posted 2000-10-21 10:12 AM


Well, Thankya Bill Inc - I'll soitenly try..

brian - OK - Your spot's reserved..

Marge - Ain' life grand??..

Mark - I'd say right after Bill & brian - First come, first served here..

Kit - Thankee - We do cavort a bit, don't we?

Kethry - Glad you enjoyed...

Christopher
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9 posted 2000-10-21 11:13 AM


ROFL - Indeedy-do: I remember the first picture... but for some reason... like the second one better...   No offense Seymor... LOL
Denise
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10 posted 2000-10-21 08:07 PM


Delightful poem, Nan! Great pictures too!

Denise

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11 posted 2000-10-21 08:15 PM


SMOOCHES, SMOOCHES, everywhere, but not a kiss for me....(pouting)  

Loved it Nan...quite insightful...and I will opt, for what's behind door number three....*wink*

RainbowGirl
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12 posted 2000-10-21 08:20 PM


Damn, here I was slowly nodding off and then you made me laugh...

HUSG

Gemini
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13 posted 2000-10-21 08:57 PM


Nan-This is just too special!, I liked it very much.
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2000-10-21 09:57 PM


Nan,
You are a wonder. And If your spot in my heart grows any larger, I'll need a double bypass. Once more wonderful, love Sy

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15 posted 2000-10-21 10:17 PM


simply delightful - you never cease to amaze me
Martie
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16 posted 2000-10-21 10:18 PM


Nan--loved the poem and the pictures...thanks for this look at passion.
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17 posted 2000-10-21 10:24 PM


Nan! OMG! You have ignited a little part of me here, this is a wonderful work you've done...to see these faces here, in happy times...thank you much
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18 posted 2000-10-21 10:28 PM


Nan* This was great...the poem alone would
have been enough to rave about but the
photos of those that we adore....a fabulous
addition!!!!

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19 posted 2000-10-21 11:23 PM


smack-a-thon...I should have known to look for the play on words...

too cute, nan...{~,^}


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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20 posted 2000-10-22 11:05 AM


Having a busy time down in Chattanooga, but not too busy to give Nan another big "smooch"...this time from me..for a job well done.  We have met some terrific people in our travels...and Nan rates highly.
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21 posted 2000-10-22 11:26 AM


As for standing in line, fellas - fuhgeddaboutit - I'm keeping this down a one-man line as much as possible - we wouldn't want Sy to get a reputation as a slut, now would we??? What's that?  A line for Nan???  ohhhh... well, then, nevermind - lol.

As far as a line for Lorelei - well, she runs her own line and doesn't need any help from me.  So, if you wanna stand in her line, go ahead.  But you might be waiting for a long time - lol.

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22 posted 2000-10-22 07:10 PM


This is NOT right!!!! I'm the Balladeer and I haveta kiss Sy while the sailor gets the ladies slobbering all over him! I want equal time!!!! Susan! Nan! Play bookends with me, too! Sy doesn't shave!!!  
Nan
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23 posted 2000-10-22 09:45 PM


PdV - The guy? or the house?..

Christopher - Shhhh - You'll hurt Sy's feelings...

Denise - A fun day was had by all... thanks..

serenity - SMOOOOOOOOOCHES...

RG - If I can make you smile, my day is a success...

Gemini - Thankee... These people are pretty special..

Sy - I'm just sorry I missed the first round.. .. SMOOCH...

Wil - Watch yer back, my friend - Ya never know where we'll show up next..

Martie - Thanks - It's a passionate group all right..

passing shadows - Thank you - for enjoying..

Butterflies - Thanks - This seemed like the pics would make it a wholistic experience, ya know??...

Sunshine - Moi? Playing with words? Soitenly - and thanks..

Lorelei & LJA - Luv ya both...

Deer - Better watch out!!!...

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24 posted 2000-10-25 04:58 PM


Ah... Long John needs another smack
(Right on those cheeks he keeps in back)
Smooch on, ladies... hold him steady...
suthern's got her paddle ready!! *G*

Loved this one, Nan... And the pics are great!



Charisma
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25 posted 2000-10-25 06:22 PM


smack-a-ton....
what about me...
I love smooches...
as you can see.....


loved the pic....and also the poem.....superb.

Charisma

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26 posted 2000-10-26 09:11 PM


Hiya, Nanners.   This was simply exquisite! ALL OF IT!  
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27 posted 2000-10-26 09:29 PM


too cool for peanut brittle school yuh
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