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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
A small whisperd glance that fell from my lips came quickly to your arms feeling your finger tips. Your touch of light so pure that stars would slowly weep came to a soul flying blind landing softly at your feet. Knelt down and drained from all of lifes contempt you showerd your hearts desire reviving your souls content. Leaning over to kiss the day of light anew you opened up your eyes that comfort slowly grew. That first kiss came soft as the sunrise gave you care to hold onto a chance and learn of it what you dare. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Michael G, this piece starts softly, builds sensuality and stops stunningly. Excellent. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I have to agree with Kethry on everything that was said. This is amazing work!  Starts are wonderful and I can't wait to see how it will finish....... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
And I too, could not say it better, the entire build up and the finish..wow "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
And I too, could not say it better, the entire build up and the finish..wow "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I just had to have a second read and add it to my library. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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