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BirdeeB
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 106
USA

0 posted 2000-10-21 12:44 PM


tear drop
slides down
my solemn cheek
a wiltering me falls soflly
to the ground.
Desperately, I
fight to find the words to help
you see, that I am ok.
"No need to worry,"
I say
"I'll be ok."
Just Let me be, let me
Breathe in
all the suffering
around me.
You kept me
breathing.
You drowned
in my world,
in my eyes.
Devastation
is forever a part of
me.
Take it back
take back your love,
take back your need
Take away my pain
and misery
that was caused by you
A
Single
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s.........


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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2000-10-21 01:04 AM


BirdieB,
I am so sorry to see you hurting so much. Heh, there is a patch of love on your heart, specially delivered to you from me. Just take a walk to the nearest park, imagine I am next to you with a bouquet of dahlia's. I give you a sweet kiss on the cheek and say, life is worth living with you.
Cheers, I am here.

"Take away my pain
and misery"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-10-21 08:53 AM


BirdeeB~
So tearfully said -
yet in the ache there is beauty in your thoughts.
Lovely, dear poet.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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