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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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northern mountains, Idaho

0 posted 2000-10-20 11:48 PM


~ ~ ~
Speaking of luxury -
like a bird you carried me
on wings of ecstasy -
winds of memory.
~ ~ ~
Of sensuality -
I wish I could write so free,
yet so hidden be -
of you and me.
~ ~ ~

X O X O X O X O    R.J.G.
~ ~ ~
(After reading more of his poetry!)

© Copyright 2000 Rosemary J. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
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Wilmington, Delaware
1 posted 2000-10-20 11:50 PM


Love shared - as it should me ~ sounds like you and Dale are perfectly mated ~S~
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-10-20 11:53 PM


on wings of ecstasy -
winds of memory.
~ ~ ~
Of sensuality -
I wish I could write so free,
yet so hidden be -
of you and me.
================
beautiful RM...
yes... sometimes its hard to be subtle when we express our emotions ..
so much said perfectly here .. in few well spoken words...
indeed..
take care
jm

lucky
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3 posted 2000-10-20 11:56 PM


RJ...!!!!

Not so hidden anymore... I get you a computer, and what do you do... tell the world.


Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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4 posted 2000-10-21 12:01 PM


Wilfred Yeats - I love your responses to Dale, and thank you for your response to this!

Janet Marie - Thank you for your wonderful comments!!!

lucky - you rascal !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-10-21 09:25 AM


Rosemary~
Such love to light the day !
You two are kind of like watching children play ...
what an adventure to see the love and laughter ...
spinning your merry-go-round.

You're soooooo cute !

And Lucky~
You're sooooo - well, I guess lucky is the word !  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Victoria
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6 posted 2000-10-21 10:58 AM


It is wonderful you both write poetry..i can see why his name is lucky..laughing at his response..haa... lovely poem Rosemary

                   ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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Idaho
7 posted 2000-10-22 01:01 PM


Honey, I don't really remember what exactly happened last night... But I had this dream and I.......... Ooops

Lucky me..!!!!



Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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northern mountains, Idaho
8 posted 2000-10-22 02:15 PM


Marge - you're always so sweet!  Thank you!

Victoria - you made me smile - thanks for your comments!

lucky - you RASCAL ! ! ! ! ! !    
(Actually I thought it was lucky me!)


lucky
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9 posted 2000-10-22 02:26 PM


Roraemarieeeee,,,, I think you ought to look up the definition of "LUCKY"



Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal

lucky
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Idaho
10 posted 2000-10-22 02:27 PM


Rosamarieeeee,,,, I think you ought to look up the definition of "LUCKY"

< !signature-->

Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal




[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-22-2000).]

Martie
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11 posted 2000-10-22 09:45 PM


Rosemary--I think you are both lucky!!!!!
lucky
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12 posted 2000-10-22 10:49 PM


Nope... Martie,
I'm the only lucky one around here... but you know, she's lucky too... right..? I sure hope she knows that..!

Love ya dale......

< !signature-->

Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal


[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-22-2000).]

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