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Fantasy Poet ... (moth to the flame)

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Janet Marie
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0 posted 10-20-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Janet Marie

His words dance and rise with grace upon the page,
beckoning to my heart ... his invitation for desires to engage.
His rhymes enchant me ... their promises to entice and linger,
his verses slide golden rings of love gently 'round my fingers.

I long to see love ... through his poetic, gifted, eyes,
to share his vision, his dreams, to then see where my future lies.
To know his secrets ... to touch the core of his soul's essence,
to be consumed and contented by the grace of his poetic presence.

Just to know the gifts of his passion's pleasures,
to touch, to taste ... to discover his many sensual treasures.
Should fate grant this chance ... his every fantasy I wish to fulfill,
would my dreams come true as this desire overtakes my will.

By his every word conceived ... I am captivated,
Transfixed on his offerings ... I am fascinated.
Baptize me in the sweet depths of his poetic cascade,
I surrender to the temptations as all my resistance fades.

Drawn to his poetic promise ... this offering on bended knee.
An invitation to taste contentment ... a chance to dance with ecstasy.
Temptation and fascination ... born of desperation and desire.
To just once ... be touched like this ... to just once be taken higher.

Do I look to the stars for the answers ... does the moon know where my heart lies.
Will there be anything left of me ... once I drown in the depths of his eyes.
Does the sun know the secrets ... will the mist of morn whisper what I should do.
Will I be able to find my way back to me ... once I fall any deeper into you.

Janet Marie

I have a project that may take me from here for a little while ...
a new job of sorts ...
I will still be stopping into read ...
but may not have time to reply as much I love
to do.
please understand E-mail replies may be slow in returning.
please forgive my silence ... and know I'd rather be here.
my love to all in poetry land
jm




[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 10-20-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 10-20-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Do I look to the stars for the answers ... does the moon know where my heart lies.
Will there be anything left of me ... once I drown in the depths of his eyes.
Does the sun know the secrets ... will the mist of morn whisper what I should do.
Will I be able to find my way back to me ... once I fall any deeper into you.

Janet--this is wonderful writing...perfect Janet Marie...and yes, trust me you will be there...only bigger and better.
Wilfred Yeats
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2 posted 10-20-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for Wilfred Yeats   Email Wilfred Yeats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wilfred Yeats's Home Page   View IP for Wilfred Yeats

Jm -
you are going to have a lot of responses to this - i've no doubt - i can hear the wolves howling - Fantastic write -
Christopher
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3 posted 10-20-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Awwww *blush* Janet - it was SOOOO sweet of you to write this for me!  

Hugs lady - good readin'!

C

Read my Words.
Read my Face.
Don't just look at either.
-C

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In the space between moments


4 posted 10-20-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

"Do I look to the stars for the answers ... does the moon know where my heart lies.
Will there be anything left of me ... once I drown in the depths of his eyes.
Does the sun know the secrets ... will the mist of morn whisper what I should do.
Will I be able to find my way back to me ... once I fall any deeper into you." --Phenomenal ending to a superb piece of work my friend!  I miss seeing you around, but it's great to have you stop in when you can!  


*Krista Knutson*

"One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar."
Helen Keller

Sunshine
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5 posted 10-20-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

JM

moth to the flame...you're not to blame...
rise to the skies...where fantasy lies...

come quick, come quiver...he's the one, who's the giver...
rapidly lost can be...the lover of fantasy...

do what you must, quick, to trust...
and long shall you be, in the romantic fantasy...

JM...see you soon

Rosebud1229
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6 posted 10-20-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

awesome poem JM you've penned the emotions so beautifully here.
Jamie
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7 posted 10-20-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

wonderful JM
Daniel J D
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8 posted 10-21-2000 12:39 AM       View Profile for Daniel J D   Email Daniel J D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daniel J D

"I surrender to temptations as all my resistance fades"
Hope you return soon enough, great write, love it.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
doreen peri
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9 posted 10-21-2000 12:46 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

"Will there be anything left of me ... once I drown in the depths of his eyes"?

therein lies the question, huh?
(((hug))) great writing MIA-poet-gator

i don't know the answer but i'll tell you this... you sure posed all the questions absolutely perfectly.. Ms. JM POET.. your words dance my screen  
Parker
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10 posted 10-21-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Janet, love it.... must be some good inspiration to get you to write this.  
So if I wave a torch in front of you, will you fly into my fire...

Parker.....
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11 posted 10-21-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

"Hey lovie..."

still recuperating from a kidnapping myself...but it was...well, not so great, but not so bad either.  And "they liked me!!! they really liked me!!!"

e ya later. *wink*
Butterflies_dont_cry
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12 posted 10-21-2000 01:20 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

My Sweet SS you have penned the draw to that
consuming flame with that wing tipped pen of
yours sooooooo well...you KNOW ya di ya di ya
yeppers...(ya know I tried
the losing the "..." just isn't the same!)
So this is about Christopher??  ....nah this flame you are
referring to is much much to big  
...sorry I owe him a few..LOL  

Girlie you penned a fantastic weave and I
love it when you write about that
flame...the fire dance!!!
Love ya! **BF's and AW's**
EagleOne
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13 posted 10-21-2000 02:10 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

You just knew the title would draw me in didn't you.    Exquisite is a word that has come up a few times of late, and it certainly applies to this masterful work. Take care!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.
Janet Marie
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14 posted 10-21-2000 02:28 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Martie ...thank you my sweet friend ...and I do trust you...I ve seen your heart... I read your poetry  

Wil... LOL...thanks for stopping by to howl and for the fantastic.

Christopher ...so who told ya .. man, its so hard to keep a secret in here   LOL
thank you for the read and for blushing.

Krista ... thank you sweets ... I will still be around reading .. cant stay away from poetry.

Sunshine ... thank you for the verse and the read.. you pen the moth flame dance well.

Rose ... thank you for the awesome dear.

Jamie & Daniel .. thank you both kind poets sirs.

Dor ... YES.. that is indeed the question..
when i turn into a butterfly and know the answer I will let ya know  
and this reply by you DANCED on MY screen
THANK YOU.

P-man ... now you should know about inspiring the lady poets...
my sweet swoon gator  
and you know you dont need no torch ...
all ya gotta do is smile...that will be more
than enough draw.
latersweetteasegator

SEN ... you know me baby...
got my singe proof mascara on and flying low  
yea ..you know ...
later lovie
me

Holly ...  and ... and .... and then ....
YOU KNOW  LOL ...
me thinks me wings are starting to smoke  
yes we know...flick thy bick LOL

Eagle... hello fellow moth and b-day boy ..
and THANK you for the exquisite!!! ...now i feel like its my b-day  

thanks all for reading ...
ya make this moth smile
jm


[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 10-21-2000).]
Ethan Halo
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15 posted 10-21-2000 02:56 AM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

JM-
oh you big sweetheart! what a lovie-dovie one. this was very sweet and so full of compliment, tribute...
and desire...

and i know you'll be back. this was a nice note to have an absence on.
-------
"his verses slide golden rings of love gently 'round my fingers."

"to share his vision, his dreams, to then see where my future lies"
-------
and the whole last stanza was great. the golden rings line...great line. the flow and image *brrr!* i got a chill, it's so good!

come back soon!


I am reminded of the immortal words of Socrates who said, "I drank what?"



[This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 10-21-2000).]
Mark Bohannan
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16 posted 10-21-2000 08:58 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

First solid step...followed by another and all out of the attraction to a burning flame.  Hhmmmm, sounds like it is going to get nothing but hotter and more intense.  So, could this be a bad thing?  I think not.  Wonderful write my sweet friend and if you lift those wings up off the ground, they wouldn't be smokin so much.  You might need them to fly down south again ya know.
Kit McCallum
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17 posted 10-21-2000 09:12 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

"By his every word conceived ... I am captivated,
Transfixed on his offerings ... I am fascinated.
Baptize me in the sweet depths of his poetic cascade,
I surrender to the temptations as all my resistance fades."

Dear Janet Marie ... I think this may possibly become a favorite of yours, for me! Wonderful wording, loved the flow, and the sentiments ... aaaahhhh, such beautiful thoughts. Superb writing JM ... I loved this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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18 posted 10-21-2000 09:13 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

JM, great writing...you are one of the best!
Marcy

"Will I be able to find my way back to me ... once I fall any deeper into you"
Janet Marie
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19 posted 10-21-2000 11:07 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Ethan ... thank you baby ...for always reading me ...and I love giving  ya the chills  

Mark ... yes my cowboy ...you know me well ...and me thinks its time to let me wings cool and rest a bit .. ya know...yeah you know...and ya know how I love the south   TY my sweet friend.

Kit ... Thank you SO much...
its an honor to be on your fav list...

Marcy... hey you....so good to see you here girlie and TY and yes ...
that was my fav line of all too  

THANK YOU ALL for the reads and kind words.
JM
tracie66
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20 posted 10-21-2000 11:13 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Janny~
Your words always leave me breathless, this is a most pleasurable read...thanks for sharing and hope to see you back here soon
Take care out there and I'm sending a winged ~HUG~ your way
Love ya
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Janet Marie
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21 posted 10-22-2000 10:39 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Thank you sweet Tracy for the hugs and kind words...
also for being a faithful reader of my work...
and I hope to not be kept away from my repling for too long ...
as I said I will still stop into read as time allows while I do this work ..
but I may not be able to reply as much as I love to do...
you take care too sweet poet
jm
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22 posted 10-22-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

JM,
This poem is an epopee. And its net will capture many a sun. Now it is up to you to pick the right one. *L*  
Janet Marie
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23 posted 10-22-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Sweet Sy...YOU are the epopee ...
and me thinks me net has too many holes ...
sometimes the sun burns ...
Being a moth aint all its cracked up to be...
thats why I wear singe proof mascara  
*winkiewinkie*
THANK YOU for the "epic" reply *S*
later-wise-poet-gator
me
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24 posted 10-22-2000 09:20 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Janet--

and to think I ALMOST missed this one.
gosh I must be starting to slack quite
terribly LOL. You KNOW I love it when
you write like this. Seems from time to
time dear friend...you and I share the
same thoughts/feelings. The only difference
is that you pen them so much better than
me! Just take that compliment and smile.
Do what you must, write when you can. I know
I along with everyone else here totally
understands the duties of real life. None
of us can be here as much as we like, and
some of us spend wayyyyy to much time here
as it is. I know I'm guilty! LOL. Take care.

Love ya,
Amy
P.S. I wrote ya a letter (snail-mail) yeee hawww today. Will send it to ya in tomorrow's mail.
 
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