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In Her Relection
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In Her Relection |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I took a walk in the woods to enjoy a spring time day, and though I wasn't searching many answers came my way. I stopped by a babbling brook in my reflection what did I see? I saw someone proud and strong it's true, that person was me. I didn't see a reflection of one scared and all alone, nor was it the reflection of one whose heart had turned to stone. I saw a woman spreading her wings she was more than ready to try, she had finally drawn the strength to spread her wings and fly. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Gentle Spirit! Lovely! Denise |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Spred your wings and fly to the clouds Don't worry about the past or the pain They will forever be lost in the crowds As you take flight and grasp all your gain ========================================== Wonderful verse showing the commitment to yourself as you proudly where your colors and soar through the blue pages. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
D, Mark, thank you both for the extremely kind comments. Mark, I loved your verse. I wrote this just a few short months ago right before I left a bad marriage, and right after I realized it was "Time for me to fly" Again, thank you both. ~warm hugs and big smiles~  |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
GS, I’m happy you’re on your feet and you’re ready to soar. Time heals all wounds, so go forward and release the past, ever more. Melton |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ This is a lovely image of hope emerging on the wings of self-assuredness. I like that ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge, Melton, thank you both so much for your kindness and for the encouraging words. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
fly Gentle Spirit fly and be free for in your reflection I'm sure that you saw all the things that you truly can be. . . Wonderful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you showed your strength through your words....well done. Charisma |
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