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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Next Time ~*Marge Tindal*~ I'm gonna love you better next time Wrap you in the bliss of another kiss Cloak you in romance sublime I'm gonna love you longer next time Shower you with endearing affection Fold you in satin so fine I'm gonna love you deeper next time Pen for you my heart in capture of raptured rhyme When you think it's over It's only just begun Cause I'm gonna love you like nobody's loved you for a long, long time ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well come on then!!!! What are ya waiting for?????? |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ What a most delicate and delightful piece...loved every bit of it  This is my fav  When you think it's over It's only just begun Cause I'm gonna love you like nobody's loved you for a long, long time Take care Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--great choice of words...and with the rhythm, I think you just wrote a song. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this would make a lovely song...... Mark~ you fickle little cowboy........ -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"I'm going to love you, like nobody's loved you, for a long, long time..." yep < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- love this, my friend. wonderful. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This would make a great song!! Beautiful! Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Talk, talk, talk!!! I'm three hours away!!!!! What's stopping ya???? My girlfriend? oh, I forgot  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay so now I come back to tell you that I love this piece from you because you got me so excited that well, can ya blame me. Anyway....It is lovely and I am still waiting for you...Balladeer is one sweet man I know...but Michael my friend....can't we work something out? You take her to dinner one night and I take her to dinner the next and so on?????? Ohhhh and my sweet friend SEA-----"She" might not have a hubby ya know....a cowboy can't live on dreams alone. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, Superb, I wish I was that person you so want to cherish. Great write. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your at your best when your writing about love Margie. this is a sweet tune you sing for us.. wonderful with your promise later-next-time-gator me |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm gonna love you like nobody's loved you...all the way...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge this is great, Oh yes I really like this. Marge, another smile from me, as for the next time, I'll see how my man feels when I've finished the first time. (Poor love will be sooooooo tired!!!) Bravo Marge Bravo! Marsha  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ YOU ! Tracie~ Mine too ! Martie~ Yep - I was singing my little heart out - again ! SEA~ Join me in singing it ! Karilea~ Vicky~ Thanks, my friend. Denise~ Seems everyone is singing ! Balladeer~ And, that's the ONLY thing ! MarkB~ Dinner ? How 'bout dessert ?  JD~ The day isn't over. JanetMarie~ It must be cause I feel it ! Thanks, hon. James~ Oh - I like that too ! Marsha~ LOL @ tired. Glad to share a smile. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
WOW what a lovely promise Marge. and the man who received it, is a very lucky man. and.....bad luck for Mark and balladeer superb poem Marge...
Charisma |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Absolutely wonderful Marge! I loved the style in this ... you've carried the theme through beautifully, and you sure carried an impact in the conclusion! What a great read, thanks Marge! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Glad to know you enjoyed it. But, no bad luck befalls two of the sweetest men I know ! They are both good luck charms and charming to boot ! Kit~ Thank you for noticing. It came on the tune the muses sing ! Love ya', friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Marge - you've outdone yourself this time! absolutely top drawer! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WILFRED !  Whatcha doing in my drawers ? LOL ! Thank you, sweet man for the accolades. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Fabulous my friend. You have spoken volumes here. I know you have much love to give in your heart of gold. I always enjoy reading your work. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge-Absolutely breathtakingly beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Thank you, sweet lady. I'm always pleased to know that you enjoyed it. Gemini~ I certainly do thank you for your nice comments. So glad you liked it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marge-- no one writes a tender love poem quite like you do. this would make an awesome song, i must say. as always a true pleasure to read your splendid work. kudos to you lady! take care. amy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ Thank you, honey. Sometimes the muses bring me the lovliest thoughts ... and I sing them until I can pen them. Maybe that's why they sound like songs. Or ... maybe they just are songs. Hmmmmmm ! Need to think about that one. *Winks* to ya', Amy gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is truly wonderful...to feel like this for someone |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Yeah ...... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is really sweet if I may say. What a wonderful thing to say to someone you care for so much. He must really feel a lot more special now. Thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ok Girlfriend! You have it "this time" with this poem! Great as always. Deb |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
whoever is on the receiving side of this poem has it made.(lucky guy) Ron |
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