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Close Your Eyes.........
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Close Your Eyes......... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 Close your eyes... Feel my lips... Feel the touch of fingertips... I am here... You are there... Gypsy magic in the air... So, close your eyes…it begins... Love is carried on the wind... Feel the heat... Warming breeze... As it dances through the trees... Lie with me... In the grass... Not to let this moment pass... Overhead..painted sky... Clouds are drifting slowly by... Butterfly..touch your nose... Tickles where you’ve shed your clothes... Silence reigns... Not a word... Just a song from distant bird... Grassy bed... Soft to skin... Perfect place to make love in... Touching lips... Looks of love... Angels smiling high above... Perfect day..afternoon... Time to go is coming soon... Just once more... Taste my kiss... Fill this moment with such bliss... Special place..it will be... Always in my memory... Special face..How you shine... Your love light reflects in mine... Close your eyes... You will see... All the joy our love will be... Close your eyes... Follow your dream! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i love the rhythm in this poem..one of my favorites. Splendid..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunny1~ this is perfect. -SEA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, my eyes are closing, right now..This is wonderful. Beautiful. And every single poem I read makes me think of him. So pitiful, a woman with a broken heart.. S |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So what happens if someone closes their eyes and it wasns't for them...what then...do I dare? HHHHMMMmmmm ... guess you and I might be the first ones to know then won't we...so here goes....................................................................................................ahemmm.....I ain't a tellin', are you????  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Victoria ~~~ My muse was in a playful mood and this came out with a sort of sing-song feel!! I'm glad that you liked it, too!! Thank you, my friend.....  ~~~ SEA ~~~ Oh.....you are so sweet......thank you, and I appreciate your reply!! ~~~ Sandra ~~~ One time soon, when you close your eyes, there will be new eyes to look into when you open yours again! He will find you, because your tender, beautiful poet's heart is like a beacon, and will draw a special love to you. Don't let go.......just believe...... ~~~ Mark ~~~ I promise not to tell, either!!! Let them guess!!! Thank you.....I always love to see that you have visited your ol' sister here!! Follow your dream! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Time to go is coming soon... Just once more... Taste my kiss... Fill this moment with such bliss...' Isn't that always how it is?? Oh, how time flies...oh, sorry! Was I drifting off?  Very sensual, sunny. I loved it!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Sunny1 I've been away for a little while, but who should I find at the top to the forum. Another one of your gems to start my reading off on the right track. The rhyme, the rhythm, and just the flow was simple awesome. I loved it. Can't say enough about it. Garfield |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ snowpants ~~~ It's ok.....you can drift off....this is kindof a dreamy, drifting sort of piece!! Thank you!!! ~~~ ggrn3 ~~~ Welcome back, my friend!!! It's good to see you again......and I'm so glad you stopped by here to say hi!!! Thank you!! Follow your dream! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hi lil sis, what a wonderful start to my day this is, and yes it is practically afternoon. (Well I'm awake now!) This is soooo great, such a perfect flow and rhythm, you are so good at this. So I'll close my eyes, and well actually I'd better not, because when I do those flames just start jumping again. Mmmmmmmmm a very pleasing thought, okay sis, I'm off to float, I'll speak to you soon promise. Bubbles  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ What a lilting little sing-song piece. I enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Bubbles ~~~ Oh.....I'm so glad to be able to start your day right! And I'm glad to see you stop by for a visit and thank you for your reply!! ~~~ Marge ~~~ Well thank you, and I really am glad you enjoyed this one!! I appreciate your reply! Follow your dream! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Sunny ... this was so perfectly lyrical! The flow in this was superb, I just loved it! And all this accompanied with such sensual and romantic sentiments ... a fantastic read all around! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Kit ~~~ Oh, thank you so much for coming by and giving this piece a read!!! I'm glad you liked it, as I rather enjoyed the writing part. Thank you, my friend!! Follow your dream! |
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